There should be another chapter it to gooood to stop

WOAH. This is pretty hard core stuff! I think you should continue with this story. It has a lot of untapped potential. ;)

totally not fair to have it so short. lol. I loved it, and would love to see a bit more come from this. It leaves me wanting to know what happened!
'trinity

I really hope you continue with this... I wanna see what happens. :)

This was fantastic, but the end left me wanting more. I would love to see a full blown story made with this as the first chapter.