So well written

Wow! Very well written. I love Draco and Astoria.

Simply put, this was great! I loved the rules that you've included, they really gave the story a little something extra. I really liked it :)

Lovely as always! :D

I like your Astoria! She's so observant and cunning, and such a schemer.

I love the Rules of the Slytherin Common Room! It's a nice way to structure it and I can see all the rules fitting perfectly.

The Draco/Astoria flirting is adorable! XD And I like her short relationship with Andreus, too - especially this line "Being wanted. Not as a porcelain doll or a pretty, faraway thing, not a fantasy, being wanted – touched, moved, owned."

I love the way the Greengrass sisters gossip! It's such a Slytherin, social manipulation sort of gossip. and I really like how you've structured their relationship! It's nice to see such an uncomplicated sisterly bond, as opposed to our favorite Black sisters!

And I love the ending! It reminds me of something...oh, I've got it! It was a line in one of Hannah's fics, the one about everyone saying "The Future" together, and then you and a few others wrote a drabble around it in the Remix challenge. Anyway, I like it.

OH, and I also put Daphne and Blaise together - not necessarily shipping (but maybe that), but definitely as friends - they and Nott seem to be the only sensible Slytherins in their year, who just stay apart from all the trouble and go on living their lives.

Oh, for the love of-

This was bloody brilliant!

I'm speechless.

NO...I'm not.

The characterization is wonderful, as usual, and the Blaise/Daphne dynamic is very, VERY likeable. Draco is very much in character when turning Astoria away (I love the way you've portrayed her) and I can appreciate the regality of your Narcissa.

I love it!

from Wiltshire (quite literally) )

This is great. Fantastic characterization. I was reading it really dreading when it was gonna end. You should write more about these two! the complexities of their relationship in your version is quite intriguing. Please write more about these two!

Although it's D/A and you know I'm a D/G girl, I LOVE THIS.

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Brilliant. Brilliant. I love it, the title, the writing. Bravissima.