That was a nice scene on the other hand :) The humor was right, as was the smut, I liked the bit bout Elfman.

Okay, I do like the pairing and the setup, but please research more on the sex department.
There is no way that taking an anal virginity in the showers is a good idea! It is quite the opposite actually. The standing makes it harder to relax, making the first penetration more strained and painful. Furthermore the water washes away the lube, natural and artificial, leading to a worse feeling than raw penetration as even the natural mucus is washed away.
Water is not lube.

I so wish there was more stories with Loke/Gray.
Another amazing story!

I absolutely adore this! The writing is phenomenal! I love this rare pair too! I look forward to your next update :)

I love the pairing Loke/Gray! They are so cute and adorable together! Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much! I'd love to see them tell every one that their going out with each other, and for one of them to propose to the other, then for them to get married.

omg natsu's so funny!

Please continue thus story if you can! I would love to see you take this one to where gray gets old and passes away. it would be sad but fulfilling at the same time. This is my third time reading it!

Awe I loved this story. :)
Gray is so cute in this one.

Is this an actual song?

Erza reading yaoi magazines... Pfft...!

I loved that little humor at the a/n :D

Haha, always end with humor.. Lol. Great chapter, I've really enjoyed reading this fic.

I forgot about Juvia.. That's gonna be troublesome. Great chapter.

Aww! That was so cute! This fic is absolutely amazing! Definitely gonna read the bonus chapters. :)

Aww! They are so cute! Imagine, 7 years.. That would be so hard.. Amazing chapter.