| Reviews for The Village Christmas Forgot |
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Haibara chapter 3 . 1/19/2013 I'm loving this Christmas story, and Naruto's burgeoning awareness of Hinata's attributes. Thank you for all of your hard work! |
SilverPebbbles chapter 4 . 5/21/2012 That is the most cutest story i ever read |
Rose Tiger chapter 4 . 1/8/2012 That was adorable! |
Rose Tiger chapter 3 . 1/8/2012 That was so cute! |
CaptainFlye chapter 4 . 12/23/2011 ...that was mean, u know? Not telling us what was in the letter. I mean, yeah, We got the gist of it, but it's so much better if you can slip in what it said somewhere. Also, it seemed off to have another santa and him being so quickly accepted when the kids were told he'd be back AFTER they were in bed. I'm sure you thought it through and had a reason that made sense, but, and i've certainly been guilty of this myself, you forgot to include the readers in your thoughts so it made less sense to us. Like I said, i've done that too, but mine was actually a pretty bad blunder...yeah... Anyway, loved the story. Had a great overall feel to it, and the interruption of the Kiss was excellent, and totally Konohamaru-ish. :D Thanks for the fun story. Take care, and Merry Christmas! |
jackiejacka chapter 3 . 12/22/2011 Loving this story! |
Wendbria chapter 3 . 12/22/2011 love the chapter. look forward to the rest of the story. and for christmas i will pry be reading more fanfiction :) |
CaptainFlye chapter 3 . 12/22/2011 very nice, i think you did well with this chapter. Laughed as how Naruto's thoughts are starting to turn more on focusing on Hinata. Lee as Santa? heeheehee. And may a venture a guess on the next chapters title? "and set it all right" Just noticed how the chapter titles worked together in what seems to be a poem type thing, so i'm guessing this will be the title for next chapter. Cool idea. Thanks for the new chapter! |
bakugoslittlewhore chapter 3 . 12/22/2011 Well Idk what I'm doing. :P Can't wait for the next chapt. |
MrOmen chapter 2 . 12/21/2011 good chapter and I wonder what snow is like because we experience summer in australia but that village will enjoy christmas or santa will be burning toys and christmas trees. |
Wendbria chapter 2 . 12/21/2011 awesome chapter. i love the story. i can totally see naruto doing something like this. cant wait to read more |
bakugoslittlewhore chapter 2 . 12/20/2011 Yay! |
sal8497 chapter 2 . 12/20/2011 interesting one. Waiting for he next chapter. |
Rose Tiger chapter 2 . 12/20/2011 This is gonna be fun. Keep going. |
CaptainFlye chapter 1 . 12/3/2011 hehe, this looks like it'll be fun. Looking forward to the next chapter. :) |