I loved this story

Long life to the MPREG! The men need to suffer it too xD

I'm not sure if you can call it a triangle...a square maybe?

So far, you have a pretty good plot in place. However, it was quite hard to understand with the grammatical errors. I know English is a hard language to learn, especially if it's not your first language (I can relate with that), but asking for help isn't necessarily bad, right?

I'll be here if you need some help. Just search my name on this website and pm me.

estos 3 últimos capítulos me encantaron, tu historia me costo mucho en traducirlo pero le entendí y me encanto y esta en mi lista de favoritos espero que hagas mas historias como estas

que hermosas palabras de ellos dos si que te luciste :'( me encanto este capitulo tengo mucho sueño asi que mañana le continuo sabiendo que me falta muy poco para acabar la historia

OH PERO QUE BONITO YA REGRESARON AHORA ARTHUR YA NO ESTARÁ SOLO ALFRED LO ESTARÁ PROTEGIENDO DE HORA EN ADELANTE

nunca creí que matthew aya hecho algo tan horrible ahora ya se sabe la verdad de arthur que pasara quiero leer otro capitulo pero mañana tengo escuela are el sacrificio de no leerlo

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Hey! if you need a bete or someone to fix your language I can help! My first language is German but I'm excellent in English, If you need help the best way to contact me is
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2. My home phone is 616-258-8053
If you call just ask for Sofe.

THANK YOU! MY GOD WHY CANT ANYONE EVER LISTEN TO THAT!
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Oh my... xD
David will began his romance live !
*giggles*

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Okay, this fic basically made me feels in Heaven.

Beside USUK, the Number One OTP of mine, in here you put 3 OTP of mine too especially RuPru! *squealed*

and I like the first plot as well.
About how Arthur keep his pregnancy a secret at first, with help of his friends and support from his family.
And how Alfred still actually Love Arthur badly.

And I Love every time Alfred jealous and goes rampage! xD

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and I was just realised at graduation that Alfred actually older than Arthur. Lol sorry

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Aside from grammar error and missing words, everything was fine. :)
Definitely Enjoyable!

YOUR AWESOME!

Ok, so this story was finished some time ago and I'm not sure if you will even read this, but I just wanted to point some things out
First of all, yeah your grammar is not really good (I'm not trying to be mean!), but since english isn't your first language (it isn't mine either) it's not your fault. However, you CAN try to teach yourself a little or just try to search for a beta. Asking in chapters is already a good idea, but maybe you will have more luck when you write it on your profile and start asking around the internet a little (there are plenty usuk fans who have english as their first language). Another thing I noticed is that sometimes you switch a little between your role as the author and the person you're writing about. Here a little example: "They had also begun to notice that Arthur had started wearing a jacket that could hide half of his upper body. It like he was hiding something from them."
Athur trying to hide something and the jacket covering his upper half isn't really something a normal character would notice, but rather only you as the author or reader. When you see a person in school wearing a jacket you wouldn't normally think: "Hey that's weird, maybe they are trying to hide something and ohh look it perfectly covers his upper body". Since people don't really think like that, even if it would be weird for someone to suddely wear a jacket during summer, it's just not the way people would normally think/react. I see a lot of people sometimes making this mistake, so try to think more like the charatcer: How would I react in this situation if I weren't the author? What would I do/say/think/notice and what not?
So, I'm really not trying to insult you or anything and maybe you won't even see this review, but I just wanted to point things out that I noticed and I think you really have potential and that by avoiding these mistakes you could only just get even better right? You have plenty of favs and can be really proud of the idea behind this story, since it's awesome. I hope you will see this and don't feel insulted by it (maybe I will send it per PM to you, too). So, yeah I would love to see more stories of you :)

Hi there I love the story and out of curiosity what is your first language?