Oh, Spike...

i thought of a joke for the happier note. ''their lucky, at least as cockroaches, the US government will survive the nuclear war there working SO HARD to incite. Ha! ive got a million more of these, so dont bother trying to write any, i probobly already did. Ha!

sorry,i know i shouldnt bother youwith things like my earlier review, i just started typing and couldnt stop. dont pity me, im used to my life being horrid. on a happier note, i... ive got nothing on a happier note. (halfhearted shrug)

sad, definetly. but, the ending(almost)makes this a happy story. i hope you make a sequal, with rarity going on her date, and, (hopefully) quoting the sequal. ''but while she enjoyed rays company,her mind persistantly wanderd in the direction of a certain, sad, lonely little dragon...''. good stuff eh? when it comes to M.L.P knowladge, or deep poet-like phrases,and the ability to write that deeply, all in a depresed 13 year old boy with a horrible life and a LOT of inspiration for deep, usually sad poety.

Sad yet happy interesting. i Doubt it will work out with ray so spike should keep his head up. I like it. I think you could continue it if you wanted but it's fine like this

Not a lot to review here but I needed something short and sweet after reading a steaming pile of depressing depraved bad. Not the best writing in the world from a technical stand point, but cute and a definite dawe moment.

Ah. Well, this was pretty disheartening for Spike.

I rather like Spike/Rarity, but I hardly see any of that here, so I'm glad you provided this one-shot.

Everything seemed perfect. My only quibble was the length, but that's just me. A good one-shot overall. I hope you provide some more Spike/Rarity in the future. Well done.

- ExposedWiresExposedVeins

This was a very interesting little fic. I like one-shots like these.

Please make a continuation where Rarity sees that Spike is the one for her. The world is missing a lot of SpikexRarity, and it'd be great if you helped to change that.

That would be the only way I can seriously like this fic a hell of a lot more.