Reviews for Better
Jessi Granger chapter 3 . 9/23/2018
I love this story. Please continue.
hunzbookwyrm chapter 3 . 9/29/2016
Would love to see the story go farther
readingeverythingican chapter 3 . 12/8/2011
its a good start, i always liked this part of book seven. left a great spot for harmony goodness. was wondering what Excitement you had planned for harry and Hermione? also wondering if you might consider lengthening the chapters. nothing wrong with their length now of course, its just that they're shorter than I'm used to seeing. anyway, great work so far.
badkidoh chapter 3 . 12/7/2011
great chapter
pawsrule chapter 3 . 12/7/2011
Fantastic story! I enjoy the the interaction between Harry and Hermione. Very well written, I look forward to reading more.
badkidoh chapter 2 . 12/6/2011
Well I really like it so far.
TrueLoveAlwaysLP chapter 2 . 12/4/2011
This story is really good and in character. You make the H/Hr relationship grow closer and additionally in a authentic way. Please continue like that.
Cassia4u chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
wow, this is absolutely amazing, you're a talented writer, keep writing! :D
HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
nice start
Kingdomhearts4evar chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Meh I'm too lazy to log on so... Hey this story was really cute and I hope you will be able to update soon!