A fine story, which i wonder if there will be any more horaxruc to be destroyed for that matter will voldy try this shit again? well harry isn't staying by the dursleys anymore i would guess cause it wouldn't be safe.
What happend next cause i curious about voldy's defeat and the marriage itself, so to bad you didn't continue.
Otherwise i few things i want to bring up:
-Really.. harry is in need and all they do in meantime is talk?
-I get h/hr gets potions for there mind but ron and ginny? even suspect behavior changes i mean come on cleary ron wasn't there friend and suddenly there tick all 3? everyone would notice that that damn friendship could left aside. more so fucking potions the way ron talks about hermione. clearly harry doesn't remember his girlfriend but still his friend would he really allow fucktard talk about her like that. (i know it's done in many fanfic and canon but still don't fucking get why harry let him talk like that to her)
-Harmony is fucking there to change things first is harry in different house, then she fucking needs to help them get together, she clearly changes events 1e and 2e year. But doesn't help there friendship come on! just muddle them along without interaction and other stuff. and later on is to afraid to change other things that really do need a change. sjeesh harry needs to learn, adventure etc.. doesn't do that clearly let's him wander just being weak really helps againts voldy does it.. and doesn't give much confidents for much of a friend she is.
-Which comes to another thing.. wouldn't be happy if harmony dissappears cause that leaves harry with a different hermione and early years not so happy. so thank god even if bit wary here older body is gone? no has shifted with her younger self? both time memory's she still has gives a lot of hope. strong friendship first then love very nicely done there.
-harry still hasn't said he loves her at least not how hermione said it.
ah well it turned out okay i guess other time line, but damn almost lost both hermione's.

and where is albus and his vaunted wards and monitoring alarms. sure harry wiped out the office, but competence? and just where is the vaunted ministry and their monitoring wards on underage magic? competence?

Yeah, stand around running off at the mouth while Harry gets screwed over. Excellent protection! Dumbasadoor strikes again. Thinks he's better, wiser, smarter, and stronger than everyone else, while they all suffer for him. Good job, dumbles

Good gooD

Holy cow! This chapter was so frustrating! They know Harry is in trouble, being tortured, and they just keep talking! Argh! Very compelling though. Thanks for sharing.

Would that roll call be a memory of Ferris Buellers Day Off, by any chance? LOL

You know what?! F*** it! I quit! More PRETENDING the time line is the same. Harry ALREADY told Riddle everything that went wrong with his plan! 'Most likely scenario is that they would keep on 'looping' over and over until Riddle wises up and just kills Harry when he walks in the door. Hell. he could disillusion himself, and 'A.K.' Harry from beside him in the back seat of Vernon's car!
Bella could even polyjuice herself as Petunia and disable Harry when they got to the car. Banish the trunk, throw Harry in the boot. Tom walks up, no longer disillusioned. Flash of green. No more Harry. Shrink the car. Pop it in a pocket, to dispose of later. No more evidence. Short sequel.
Didn't quite make it through chptr 49... out of 51. Nice

(what I assume to be half way thru the DoM fiasco... stopped to TALK about sh**, in the circular room, after Sirius is dead... AGAIN)

Sure, why not... We can just stop and have lengthy conversations ANy TIME we want. Bellatrix runs... let's stop and talk about getting married. WTF?!
All this whole time Dumbledore is 'down' in the DoM? He didn't go to the lobby to fight Voldy? Is he hiding... watching... waiting for Sirius to die?
WHERE the heck is Riddle? Did he conjure a chair, and sit and wait. He's just chillin' in the lobby? And now Bellatrix is sitting on his lap, just waiting, also?!
Once again... 'common sense' has left the building!
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BTW- Where are the 'advanced class' kids that trained at Grimauld, and TEACH the defense class? Forgot about those, so Slytherins can fight in the round room?

Holding up a 'scroll' and saying "take a corner", really doesn't make a lot of sense. Cylinders, tubes, 'scrolls', by their very definition, do not have corners.
If Albus 'unrolled a scroll, and said "take a corner", well... now there's corners to grab. Or, 'held up a piece of parchment'...
Whatever. Brit pick. Wiz pick. Timeline pick, as in- for 'current technology'. Do all the stuff you gotta do to make the story work. If you leave out common sense... well then...

Even though it is taking forever. One step forward, two steps back, and all that. And I know there will not TN be any improprieties. That was a good way to end that year.
Btw, I LOVE not having to read re-printed canon stuff. The 'please refer to canon here_' thing, is a godsend!

I actually cannot remember whether that line was canon, or not, but with Fudge being the 'ostrich with his head in the sand' that he is, and ALL of Britain thinking Riddle is dead, then there probably ARE NOT aurors out looking for 'Voldemort'. Why would they be?
There wouldn't be any reason to suspect a return until AFTER the night of his resurrection, and then only if you believe Harry, and NOT Fudge.

It's a little late, but...

You know... even 34 chapters later, I'm still waiting for an explanation as to how it is Hermione comes back in time- and there's two Hermiones. One older, one younger. But Harry goes back in time, and ends up in his old cupboard, and apparently there IS no 'young Harry there'. No body to stash, put in a trunk, transfigure, or anything. There SHOULD be another Harry, up in 'Dudley's second room'.
How can one DISPLACE the other, and the other one comes back, in ADDITION to the first? It's a little like Modern University Math (MUM 1) back in '83.(Nothing like going to a class, watching a TV, with 50 clueless freshmen, the lesson was 'taped' ten years before, and a foreign T.A., no one could understand. Good times) Anyway... Selection WITH replacement, or selection WITHOUT replacement. There was never a category for 'select one and double it, effectively increasing THAT outcome's chances of selection.'

Kind of ironic, dontcha' think, that you are trying to write an inoffensive, T-rated story, especially clean for kids to read, saying things like inappropriate, and 'earthy' for swearing, and then you let Ron say 'bloody'.

In 'UK speak', is that not the worst of ALL swearing terms?! Kind of like saying ' American swearing is bad, but Brit swearing is OK'?

( the middle finger means the same in sign language, too. It doesn't matter that you can't 'hear' the insult.)

I really MUST disagree, vehemently. Yes... words DO have meaning. Words are 'crutches' for small or 'weak' minds who do not concentrate sufficiently. Better trained, stronger wizards and witches learn to cast spells 'wordlessly', or silently. Practice enough, and soon they may be able to 'snap cast', or cast without the usual wand movements that beginning students learn. At this point, there is solid proof that magic is more INTENT based, and less reliant on incantation, wand pattern, or even language. (I'm sure whatever word used for a lumos in any country and any dialect works the same, so HOW can it matter WHAT you say. It doesn't. It's what you THINK, and how well you concentrate.) (Think of Harry's summoning of his broom in the Tri-Wizard, versus how literally 'bad' of a student, and wizard, he was before all that practicing. Harry 'learns' very little in canon during years 5 and 6, between Umbridge, Snape, and arguing with Hermione, BUT he learns so much in year 4, during his studying for the third task, he's practically NEWT level in some things)
A notch above that even, would be to cast 'wandlessly'. Dumbles snuffing some candles by waving his hand may seem piddly. A salem witch about to be the main attraction at a bonfire, artfully freezing the flames and untying herself to escape, is a whole 'nother matter.

(gotta cut this short. my kid is going to bed)

And here I skipped that part, because 'why would I ever have to hear all that same Trelawney rubbish over again'. (at nearly 600 fics, I have seen it a FEW times)