I absolutely loved it! It's amazing. Thank you so much!

My first Malik/Altair fic I read! And I have to say that this was so enjoyable to read! Thank you so much for writing this wonderful fic! :D

Priceless and almost... classy, in the way you delivered their flirtatious banter. It was nearly entirely coveted, one could, or should, say and was humorous to boot. I admire the way you managed to upkeep a battle while they commited such acts, and that the flirting was weaved in thin threads through the battle, rather than the battle weaved through the flirting.

It was something I could read more than once in a quick succession for its amusing qualities. The progression of events was well, and quite unpredictably, charted. Almost a crackfic... but not quite so?
Everything (beyond the obvious of the initial chaos) was subtly insinuated - from Altaïr's mischevious challenge to Malik's sly removing of Altaïr's hood. Quite honestly, I did not read this for romance, rather humor, but this story was too good to pass up.

In short - I liked it, liked it a lot. Perhaps I'll read it again now :) I'm probably going to read more of your fics.

Haha that's funny

I am literally *biting* my hand in order to keep my laughter down 'cause it's so late at night. Dear Lord, this was hilarious. XDD I loved absolutely everything about it, such an entertaining little story! Thank you so much for writing this!

What an awesome relationship these two share! Absolutely love this couple!

I love the flirting and side comments they said to each other. Don't you just hate when you bump into those pot holding ladies and a whole war breaks out? Sighs

this was awesome :D more please! i want to know what they do next this was super kinky and funny way. love it

Definitely some of the best fic I've ever read. The fighting was amazingly vivid, which is SO rare, the banter was clever and flirtatious and immature, they were silly and petty and brilliant, and I adored every second of it. _

D That was fun to read. I loved their banter. Nicely written and thanx for sharing!

All I have to say is... Well Done.

If there is something I like to read in AltxMal fics is their bantering and bickering staying IC. And this was beautifully done in each and every single one of their interactions. So even if I would have loved to read about what the guards were interrupting, I really think you deserve some congratulations for the fic. Good Job!

haha

this was pure perfection. captured them perfectly well if i do say so myself.

EXACTLY how i would imagine them bantering. while still flirting.

really weird, but okay. :)