Wow you have a town getting together to bury her. That's really generous. *evil cackle*

No, this is a wonderful ending. I love open endings like this the best, leave some mystery, leave some wonder, leave a little room for dreaming and creating our own details. I love it!

It always comes down to this: Toby or Jareth, which will Sarah choose? It's a sad choice, and I don't know if him forgetting his sister really is kind or cruel, but it's all very bitter sweet.

You are a delicious tease.

Thanks

Well done. :D

You know there really is no excuse for tiny chapters. Just write several as over sized paragraphs which frankly is all they are

hehehehe... tell your brothers to get out of my dish soap... lol... I love the humor that is so natural in each and everything you do.

ah yes... Labyrinth... one of my long time favorite movies of all times.

this first chapter is magnificent...
It compels me to see more possibilities than ever before.

thank you.

Not bad. I had the thought once too, that Jareth might only look hansom because it'd be easier to tempt girls, not that he's naturally handsome. After all, he is a GOBLIN king. Thank you for writing it. :3

I absolutely love your story! I apologize for the brevity, but I can hardly keep my eyes open atm... So here's the (very condensed) gist...

I love that he shows her what she's getting into (even up to the job!), and how unafraid she is...

Most of all, though, I loved how truly inhuman you made him... a real Goblin King... smile It's rare to read, and I rather picture him like this...

Thank you, and have a lovely day! :)

Armate

Damn, they've barely touched, and yet the whole thing drips sensuality. This is wonderful.

I love that Sarah is the possessive one, though I wonder how much Jareth is REALLY fighting it. But then again, if he resents her apparent partial rule, that could be damned interesting, too.
And hot damn, Sarah really IS a Goblin Queen. If Jareth doesn't go for that, he's CRAZY.

Hollllllllyyyyyyy craaaaaap this is awesomeeeeeeee! I'm five lines in, and it already paints such an absorbing picture I feel like I'm salivating to get started reading this. And thirty one chapters, for Samhain!? I HOPE that's intentional!
My only complaint thus far is I have no idea how you can stretch "thirteen" to four syllables.
"Bedroom laughter" is such a hypnotic phrase, because there are so many ways it could stretch, and it's just killing me to know exactly what meaning you use with it, but in the best of ways. I love just how shadowy Jareth's presence is. It's intense and overbearing, it creates a sense of wondrous tension as to what will happen.
And you so perfectly capture the best kind of Sarah after the Labyrinth, that difficult to grasp, intangible line that really only she can straddle, of being magic and not. This is AMAZING.

I really liked this drabble series. I think I especially loved how you incorporated dialogue from the movie and used it here in a wholly different context.