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doesnt this have a continuation? thisbis good! it kind of makes since that autria might be an S and M kind of guy since he is all prim amd proper. And its a hot idea to begin with. hahaha XD

I don't know if it's that I like the pairing or your writing. In any case, I would greatly appreciate more Austria/Belarus because, thanks to you, I've fallen for them. That is all. ;)

I swear, that last line... Had me smiling for days :DDD

YOU'RE AMAZING HVADJVKKKFSGK PLEASE WRITE MORE AUSTRIA BELARUS CX Because of you, AustriaxBelarus is officially my OTP XDDDDD

This: 'She could scratch, and the lacquer would crack away, the wood would splinter and dig in to her cuticles, the way it did when her brother locked her out, leaving her to claw at the door.'

And this: '...a terrible, dissonant blend of notes cutting through the room, and that was her, all harsh and shrill and unwanted.'

Powerful testaments as to how Belarus sees herself. On the outside, she's a crazy, obsessed girl. But in your deft hands, she's a pitiful creature begging to be loved. And boy does Austria really 'love' her. Tsk, tsk...bad Austria. I never realized he had it in him to do such things. He's easily one of my favourite characters, and you have wonderfully fleshed him out. So thank you for doing this, for sharing. Oh, and now I have hands fetish too. I shall never look at a piano the same again ;)

I hecka agree with you, about how they totally don't work but then they can...and also I have to say I'm so fascinated how well written your story is it made me think "wow Austria? And Belarus? Together, I gotta keep reading".

Oh god, I am not even going to try to pretend that I did not enjoy everything about this story, this pairing, and all the porniness.

The characterization, the intensity, and the delicious S&M completely had me hooked. I am so damned in love with Austria right now because of this fic, you don't even know. And even though I have never even thought of this pairing before, the way you've portrayed them just makes so much sense, and works so well, that it's just heartwrenchingly...hot. (yes I admit I find it really hot okay).

Seriously. Everything about this story just... Pleases me. A lot. Thank you for posting this, really. (And the hand fetish thing- I KNOW RIGHT? I have totally had one ever since I first read Austria's comic strips).

For a sex-heavy story, I'm having a lot of emotions about this.

It's like... sad! They both have such sad stories from the perspective you took here.

I don't even know. I felt like maybe crying (closer to crying than I usually get with fanfiction, at least) after finishing. Needed a few deep breaths. Lonely Belarus just must depress me.

Also, you wrote it so perfectly that the story went straight into my brain without any, "wait, what the heck?" moments.

/Slow claps

I've always been one for crack pairings and any pairings involving Austria, and I almost hit myself when I realized I'd never even considered Austria/Belarus before. Wonderfully written, both of your fics :) I love the idea of them, love, love, love. I applaud the way you don't write Austria as some whiny weak nation, and how you make Belarus more than just some crazy stalker. Great characterization.

I'd also just like to say I really loved your Edelweiss arc :) and that I'm a terrible person who didn't review, but in my defense, it's about 2:30am and I figured one semi coherent review would be better than a bunch of key spazzing :)

You are an amazing author! Truly!

Thank you for writing this! I'm glad that you added more to what you started in White Horses. They have a really interesting dynamic and I hope you add more!

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My heart-So beautiful I can't-

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It's been a while since I last read anything Hetalia-related and I'm extremely glad this is the first thing I read since coming back to the fandom. I actually read the prequel before and I actually read it once again for the sake of remembering lol. I absolutely love To Ride On 3 Simply beautiful! I adore how you portrayed every character you used and the plot, oh gosh you simply made it work in my opinion.

It didn't hurt that the smut between Austria and Belarus was awesome ;D

I would love to read another sequel if you're planning one, however the story's wonderful enough as it is.

Thank you so much for making my day and converting me once again to AusBel /heart

Something about AustriaxBelarus is strangely appealing...

So the fancy dinner was just part of Austria's kinky game in which he disciplines Belarus for her poor manners huh? xD

You do an EXCELLENT job at describing the story, bringing it to life - it plays in my head like a suspenseful movie :)

And the revelation about Hungary at the end sort of explains everything...

Epic, just epic...wow, I thought the charachters were incredibly in-charachter, especially Belarus, and I love this. Thank you for producing such an awesome fic :D

seriously, this is epic! And you're right this pairing just shouldn't work, and yet is does, and in character too! 3

AustriaxBelarus? Interesting couple, I never though of that one before