This is great... lots pf possibilities... MORE PLEASE...
NOW!

What if Xander dressed up as Griffith?

Your not the only one who hates that pairing.

might have been best to just leave things off after halloween

poor xander, nobody deserves to have to live through the memories of a struggler

I'd love to see where this could go. B/X has always been my preference for Buffy. I loathe B/A - he may be a capable fighter, but he's a moral coward. Oddly enough, the age difference between him and Buffy never bothered me at all. He's just a substandard person period. But I like the fact that he's trying, at least, however slowly he's improving, and you captured that well with his decision to stick around to help Willow.
I hope you decide to continue this. Thanks for taking the time to write, and for letting us read it.
Maxtaf

In addition to being YAHF, the dialogue here is unbearably clunky.

I would definitely say that you need to go through and do a spell/grammar/punctuation check. There are a lot of points where I notice the little things like the run-on sentences and lack of commas, and it completely takes me out of the story.

Maybe ask someone to beta for you. Trust me, you will notice a massive improvement in quality.

ohoh omnious..

and poor willow. she could kill/transform someone just having sex with them.

scary the amount of chaos the two costumes.

imagine people using saya's blood like Diva.

and xander accidently attracting scary things.

Your not the only one who hates them together lol. I am always saying that Angel must be Edward's mentor for all things broody and creeper.
Really interesting idea. If you haven't written the sequel already I really hope you do soon. If you have then I expect I will be leaving a review in the next day or so lol.
Oh and I really really love your idea for Willow. Very cool.

I always thought Buffy's attraction to corpses- albeit well preserved corpses- was disgusting just like Xander did. Not only that, but Buffy/Angel was always a disaster waiting to happen. Hell, at least with Spike there wasn't a potential end of the world crisis always resulting from her fucking him.

Also, I hope you don't plan on making Angel/Willow a thing because, eww. Also, how did Willow keep her changes? From what I remember, Xander was the only one who kept anything significant, and there was a reason for that.

I am excited to read the sequel. This was a brilliant story. :3

I hate Buffy with any of her canon pairings, Angel was doomed from the beginning and he's kind of worthless, what with the cryptic advice and disappearing, even if he did eventually become actually helpful the whole soul curse setup was always a bad situation. Riley was ok in some ways, but his loyalties would always be split at best and the less said about Spike the better. Really, their's something wrong with canon Buffy, almost anyone would be better than her choices were.

I really enjoyed this story alot and You aint the only one who hates the Angel/Buffy pairing. Keep up the great work.