WHAT DO YOU MEAN COMPLETE THAT'S NOT AN ENDING! IT'S A CLIFF HANGER! DO THAT BREAK UP AND NEVER SEE EACH OTHER AGAIN? DOES ALLEN KILL HIMSELF IN SPITE OF HIS STUPID UNCLE!? OR DO THEY ALL LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER? THIS STORY WAS SO GOOD AT FIRST I WAS CRYING BECAUSE GLORIOUS ANGST NOW I'M CRYING BECAUSE I NEED A RESOLUTION! UGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!

That's stupid! You can't expect someone to get over shitty feeling by leaving the few friends they have behind and you certainly can't run away from all your problems. BAKA!

Good story! I enjoyed reading it! haha though I wish Lavi and Allen had been able to be more of a couple for longer. I wanted some lovin darn it! haha Great job! I really enjoyed it! I'll go find the sequel now! :)

-Yvonne

Okay, while I honestly love this story, I don't know if I should hug you or kill you for writing this. BUT HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT OFF LIKE THIS I SWEAR TO GOD THAT IF I GO TO YOUR PROFILE RIGHT NOW AND FIND THE SEQUEL ONLY TO FIND OUT THAT YOU HAVENT UPDATED IT IN THREE YEARS OR WHATEVER I WILL STAB YOU IN THE NECK WITH A RUSTY SPOON. And on that note, I love you

Esh, this was so good! I can't wait to read more! ...but I like to read completed stories... so I'm torn. Anyway, this was great, I loved the drama and the tension! Wonderful job!

Oh, and I loved your song choices as well! :D

I'm still sad I hope I can find that sequel :P

Still a Great story :)

I was trying to hold back my tears but in the end I couldn't such a sad way to part...

NOOO THAT'S SO UNFAIR THEY FINALLY ARE ABLE TO BE TOGETHER

I'm so sad right now :(

Omg he's still alive O.O

I'm tingling with excitement I didn't see that coming but Tyki deserved it I wonder what Allen is going to do next :)

That's what i'm talking about go Lavi and Allen I still feel bad for Road though cause I know what's going to happen and Tyki you sneaky bastard how you going to take Lavi's virginity when he's drunk that's just wrong

That made me feel a little better saying all this

Great story I really love it :)

Oh my... Tyki is so evil but I know how Allen and Lavi feel about the situation man this is so interesting

NO WAY...HIS HERE!

OMG! I knew tykki was crazy but I didn't know he was insane...must run in the family

ALLEN CAN NEVER BE THE SEME!...if he does the world will end o.0