Reviews for A Twilight Carol |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wohoo! I knew it was Emmet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() At first I thought the letter might be Alice, but this sounds more like Emmet with the guy comment. Besides Alice does not remember her past to know if she believed in Santa. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() That's rich considering Charlie has been pining away for his ex wife, even though she's married to someone else. |
![]() ![]() Good story. Glad Jacob wasn't really involved much. Once again Bella is asking Charlie's permission to do something. She's 18. So many stories do the same thing. If she wants to be considered adult, she needs to act like one. That includes not asking Daddy's permission to do ever little thing. Letting him know she's going out is common curtesy. Asking permission is begging to be treated like she's still a little girl. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story. I like the new take on New Moon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's good they were able to explain to Charlie about their relationship. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very depressing. I know it is supposed to be, but wow! :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great look back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know Renee loves her, but she doesn't seem like the mothering kind. She seemed only for herself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know who it was, but it could be an elderly Bella or her grandmother. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am really not surprised to find out that the secret writer was Emmett - the wording does sound like something he'd write - but I was expecting it to be Alice. She seemed to have the most knowledge of what was going on. Huh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed your story and glad I found it during the Christmas/New Year holidays. Appropriate! Really liked that the Cullen men went on the journey with Bella while the Cullen ladies accompanied Edward. I always enjoy stories that have Bella/Emmett/Jasper interaction. I look forward to the continuation. ;-) |