I really wish somebody would continue this story it had me rolling with laughter

This is quite good. Too bad it had to end.

If only it wasn't a Neutron Star grade harem... This is my absolutely most hated type.

One would think that Ichika would mention the kidnapping./murder attempt. One would be wrong.

At least, the IS telemetry data should reveal that the opponent used a weapon on him, in case using the IS for self defense is being questioned.

Ichika releases the golden light. He's so fun to read about in your fan-fiction, because if he was just told straight up by the girls in his life information he needs to know, he would probably have a relationship with a girl relatively quickly after that.

I feel like you can continue this! It has so much more potential (not to mention you left it off on a cliff hanger). If you need ideas you can PM me and we can talk about ideas, but this story is so good already.

Sincwe the story is abandoned, this review is for anyone who thinks they might get some enjoyment out of reading this.

I'm 3 chapters in and outside of some minor stuff, it's exactly the same as watching the anime, basically typed out. Some of the script and internal monologue is different and Ichiya supposedly has more knowledge about how IS work, but he's just as weak and pathetic, the only excuse being that he can't affort to let people know he knows, which could be put down to studying hard.

It's a genuine disappointment because the synopsis essentially promised a powerful but perhaps not pompous Ichika, which would have been great. I'll give it 1-2 more chapters but if it doesn't differentiate, i'm gonna have to ditch.

genius ichika? it is welcomed!

Man, it's sad that not only I had found this story a week ago, but also that it's on adoption since two years ago and still nobody has go ahead with it, or at least I had no see anithing like this fanfiction in all the section of Infinite Stratos.

I can't allow this, this story has to be finished, and I'm gonna be the one that make it, even if I'm not the best writter for the work or if it take me years to complete it.

But, it's gonna be in spanish.

It's a shame but, being that the spanish is my main languaje, and that the english it's the second languaje I have learn (and that I'm still learning, something that could be noted in this review) it can't be in another way, maybe in a future, vhen I have finished my own projects and completed my english course, I can start translating the chapters into english again, but, it's gonna take a lot of time. Even the first chapter on spanish will take a couple of weeks or even months, I realy don't know when I can start whit this (whit the university, the work and my own projects, it's pretty hard to know), but I will start, that's for sure.

I know that you said in the summary notes than I or anybody that want's to adoptate the story don't need to contact you anymore, but, still I want to, at least, writte this review and message. And ask what kind of final was the one that you had thinking, whit only one couple or the full harem?

Well, it's all, thanks for had writte this amazing fanfiction, I will made all I can for finish it, even if it's in my own way.

Plasma stake! Gespenst's signature move!

Your writing is masterful and I am truly saddened that you cannot continue however I am glad that you got to show us what you did. Awesome writing and story. You are someone who has professional writing skills.

Wonderful story. I'm sad to see that the story is discontinued, but I do understand that sometimes things just don't work out. Anyway great job and keep up the good work.

Mind! Exploding! With! Ideas! Awesomeness! Too! Much! To! Handle!m

Lol

No seriously though. Great Job! This story has been one of the most thought out and well described stories I have read so far. It's a shame that you're leaving it though. Oh well, life doesn't always give you what you want and sometimes you gotta change things up a little. Thanks for the story! And I hope that whoever adopts it makes something epic out of it.

This is superb when you gonna update again

Honestly I was disappointed at how quickly the story simply took a leaf out of the original story line and didn't improve his denseness, communications with women, etc. The only thing that was readily apparent was he didn't suck big time at the class notes. Lack of imagination, so no thanks.

Keep up the great work.