Cannot wait for the next chapter

For goodness sake, continue this story through to its conclusion. It is far too good to leave unfinished!

They’re going to have “The Talk”. I’m scared for Eragon.

OMG this is captivating .

WHY WOULD YOU CLIFF IT THERE

when is the next chapter coming ?

Honestly, I'm pissed about the way you are managing Arya; she should be groveling for forgiveness at Eragon's feet. She literally took his daughter and deprived him of the honor of seeing her grow. I think that Arya is wise enough to recognize the she is the only one in the wrong here, and truly, she doesn't even deserve his kindness much less his respect.
Anyway, great story.

I think that lilea should be more like eragon

i think this is a really good story

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

When will Lillea find out that Eragon is her father?

Is Volound the son of Firen and Saphira?

Wonder what the conversation will bring forth in the story. Looking forward to the next update

Good chapter. Hopefully both Arya and Dragon can fix their relationship.

Just found your story and enjoyed it so far.

pls post another capter soon
i really would like to read what happens when Lillea finds out that Eragon is her father

This is very interesting it has the humor/drama of a high school story but with magic, and with dragons. One thing I found interesting was the characterization of the elves (the trainees anyway) it felt like some of them were overly emotional for their species,or for how they have been traditionally characterized as. I assume, however, this is where you take your creative liberties. Overall though the story is quite interesting to read! Keep up the good work. :)