This story is so short but so cute! I wish there was more, but maybe it's better that it's like this c: I really liked the part when the girls confronted Ayane; very well written. Anyways, keep up the good work!

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I cannot fathom as to how you created this conceptual idea. The play on thoughts and feelings. It's just incredibly thought-provoking in my mind when I read it. Incredible.

Aw, this was so cute!
I usually ship Ayane with Pin, but I fell in love with KentoAyane after reading this.
Kudos, it was awesome. )

Short and ridiculously good. The ending where he gets black coffee and you wrote "He'll get used to it." was striking. To me love is very much a growing process and also it is growing together. This is a great example of that.

mmph. such an interesting look on the could-have-been and maybes.

This is very good :) I'm surprised you haven't gotten any reviews yet.

I like that it's so short and not direct, but vague, somehow. Your work with metaphors is great.

Also, the pairing. I adore it to pieces.

Would love to read more,

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