Then Jack and Will sail off in to the sun set.

No complaints here. Within the premise, it all makes sense, with Elizabeth's training relenting only rarely, and Will's giving way entirely. And once again, you can *write*.

I wouldn't say this is bad - fast, but not bad. It's got a certain, fascinating tension formed from those three personalities - tastes, as it were - combined to give clarity to Will's mindset.

I love this! It's good, well written, and you captured jack perfectly

I loved this! You have a beautiful way with words, hon. Thanks for freeing your fics!