I liked this fic a lot. Only thing I disliked was it taking place on actual earth. That was super distracting.

this is everything I never knew I wanted. THANK YOU

Digging this dynamic okay okay

I love how this came to a full circle in the end! Bra is a character I've been searching for over 9000 years to find a good fic of and yours is fantastic! Your charactization was so consistant and spot on; it was great.

Wow, I really loved it. The ending was especially great, even if unexpected a bit.

Ohhh my this was certainly an interesting take on bras birth and Vegetas decision to stay with the family. I didn't know what to expect since most stories here on fanfic seem to be about romance, so I thought you'd end up throwing some in there but there was so much more depth into this because of the fact that the full attention went to the family relationships and development. I didn't expect the story to go the way it did which is why I'm grateful for the surprise of it all. Thank you for sharing.

Yoooo this is some shyt! If Vegeta didnt knOw before hes definitely going to know now

Wow time travel is trippy.

Wow i figured she wouldn't have gotten any training at all

Fascinating story and exploration of Bra.

Just rereading so I can't sign in and say that. I needed a pick-me-up after reading a conclusion of a Trunks' suicide story.
-D101

i've been trying to find a good Bra story that isn't about her hooking up with Goten, and this is exactly what I was looking for. loved it.

This is one very good story. In fact, I think it's great! :)

You've done well on it, really. I love the twist, the mystery of it all. I love how at first it seemed like a whole new different world, then it all ends back to the beginning, but in between, all of it made sense. Perfect sense. It takes a lot of creativity to conjure a story like this, but I say you did a wonderful job, I applaud you for that *clap clap*

It's been a while, still hoping for the epilogue. Good luck, though I don't think you need that :)

This is easily the best Bra fic I've ever read. It's the only one with an adult Bra that I don't want to strangle so kudos on the characterization in particular. The family relationships are so well presented and in character. I love this, period, and now I'm off to stalk the rest of your stories.

You are just too good at creating atmosphere and feeling. I could feel her frustration and desperation throughout. This is the kind of writing I am willing to pay for.