KEEP GOING!

actually loved this

GLENN IS BAE

I almost died laughing at the end. I'm going to hell lol

WOW. Awesome metaphors and similes. Very well written and very enjoyable to read. Thank you! :)

I know I am late for this gravy train… but… WOAH!

This was absolutely stunning! I’m awestruck…

And that ending…. Ovaries Imploded

Please more for this pairing! GGAAAAAAAAAAAAGHHH!

The minute I started reading this I was instantly sucked in. The way you describe everything with detail is phenomenal! Bravo.

iiii... think i love you. * . .corner*

Wow, girl-bonus points! I don't have the nerve for slash-but this is great. Really sexy, really teasing without being uncomfortable. Clever girl!

This may have been the hardest thing you've ever had to write but honestly, it certainly didn't seem forced in any way or form. This, quite frankly, was amazing. I think you did a wonderful job conveying the situation and writing both characters. Well done. :)

Glad I could inspire babe!

Now. On to the hawtness!

Excuse me, but are you SURE this is your first attempt at slash? Doesn't seem like it! You rocked this one around the clock and back like whoa.

I adored the way you wrote the beginning so hard. The struggle of the realization Glenn was making and all that. Realistic. Believable. And incredibly woobie awesome sauce. Your trope of Salt and Pepper shakers was INSPIRED. I found myself on the subway reading through that section multiple times. Very apt for the Dixon brothers! Bravo!

I nearly DIED when Daryl was like: "The hand job". I was like OMFG Daryl! I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE. I loved the dialogue here. I could see Glenn being all like: OMFG BIG GAY CRISIS - And Daryl being like: WHATEVS I kinda think your hot. I loved how you wrote his dialoge, keeping all his little tropes aka: "Chow Yun Fag". Because really, only Daryl could express interest and insult at the same time. *pets our boy*

AND THE ENDING. I SNORTED. LITERALLY SNORTED. Do you know what happens when you snort on the subway? PEOPLE STARE. And edge away. LOLZ.

TL;DR: I love this. I love your face. Write me more slash.