I didn't think this fit Will in the show until the gentle kiss on J.J. & the whole reason for him leaving is him think she's in love with spence. that makes a lot of sense that will would see that & not want to be part of that or leave his boy. so good job overall!

Hola, no sé hablar en inglés y he traducido tu fanfic. Espero que puedas entenderme, pero aún si no lo haces sentía que en este punto tenía que enviarte mi comentario. Estoy terminando el capítulo cinco y estoy muy enamorada de tu historia. Spencer es uno de mis personajes favoritos de la serie y aunque siempre me gustó su relación con JJ nunca me imaginé que sucediera algo romántico entres ellos. Sin embargo estoy fascinada y aunque aún no he visto la temporada final y no sé como han desarrollado los guionista la relación entre ellos dos, estoy muy contenta con la tuya hasta el momento. Cuando termine de leerla te daré un comentario final. Gracias por tomarte el tiempo de escribir ésto y compartirlo. Estaré buscando más historias tuyas. Saludos

The part about Gideon setting them up I wish Gideon were here too.

This was amazing! You are incredibly talented.

"She knew Reid would be the weaker link out of the two." That line cracked. me. UP. It's so Garcia! I mean you really nailed these characters so far and I'm only on chapter 6! Thank you for an awesome read so far!

Great story.
Loved how their relationship had its rough patches but they still got there in the end.

NO COFFEE?!
He is better off w/ the headaches.

AAARRGH! A CLIFFEE!
I'm pretty sure those are grounds for Justifiable Homicide.

Definitely a favorite. :3

You are not alone not liking Will. I really don't like the man either.

Parents should never stay together just because of the children. My parents fought all the time. There were 7 of us and we would have turned out better if they were divorced. The yelling and screaming was horrible.

Awww such beautiful vows! Especially love Spencer's!
They are officially a family!
Great story! My favorite JJ/Spencer fanfic I've ever read! Can't wait to get started on the sequel :)

Oh my God that was the perfect proposal! It wasn't a big production or anything. It was just perfect :) YAY!

NOO WHYYYYY?!
Spencer my baby :( I swear he always gets hurt!

O... M... G! Spencer just causally mentioning marriage while half asleep! Like it's obviously going to happen! Like it was meant to be! Like it's their destiny! WHICH IT IS!
Can't wait to see how he'll propose!