Cool story!

loved it!

N'awww, Sherlock's a big softie really, great fic!

Perfect portrait of the Sherlock/John dynamic. You really captured them both wonderfully!

Very good for a first fic, very well-written. I'm not an expert, but it was good to read something that had proper punctuation and quotation marks, commas in the right places, etc. I would love to see a second chapter, if you are planning on continuing the story.