I like. Short but sweet. You should post again soon, I got another taste and I want more.

By the way welcome back.

Very interesting. I do hope you update soon, as this is quite intriguing. Very well written.

Woh, that sends shivers up my spine. I hope to find more about Raija later on, about who she is and everything. Very well written!

Very intriguing chapter! I was quite amused by the Solinari bashing. My one comment/question: I'm wondering if this should be R for implications and concepts. I don't care overly much, though, just a thought.

Sorry I hadn't reviewed before. Very good first chapter, though much too short. I look forward to finding out who the two people are.

Intresting. Looking forward to another chapter

They have a weird reltionship, Good chapter, the emtions are intresting

Painful. Very good chapter although in some ways I'm confused

Intresting start.

You know, it’s been roughly 18 months since you uploaded anything to this site. I want you to know that I’ve had a lot of counselling, that I’ve spent a lot of time on therapists’ squeaky leather couches, that I’ve taken a lot of vile-tasting medication for my nerves in order to face the world with an air of yogic calm once again, that the nightmares this story once gave me—touch wood—have stopped, and that I am ready for another chapter of this twisted, dark love story. Of course, you might take pity on me, fearing—perhaps justifiably—a relapse in my mental health, and choose not too add to this story, but it would be a shame if you did.
Seriously, though, I hope you’re still writing, and, if you are, that you’ll be posting one of your stories soon.
Take care,
smith

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I like this! Very much!

(Had to up-date here, site overload, question, how does one get overload...ON A REVIEW PAGE! I had to do chapter one for it to work!

*Is gonna fry fanfiction*

I might say hi on AIM sometime...If I do it's just me...I'm also out to yap..

Mmmm...slightly confused. Why are chapters one and three the same? It was just as good as the first time I read it but still. -.-U Well, keep up the wonderful work!

~The One and Only

Gah! ::twitch twitch:: Need...coffee...

::conspirital glare:: ::nonchalant glance:: Solinari's a baka, that's about all I have to say right now. Onto more dark bloodsheddy funness!

~The One and Only

WOW! ::sitting at her computer unable to keep her jaw from dropping:: I can't even make a coherant sentence now! Well, that was totally bloody f*cking awesome! Mmmm...I can't wait to go and read the next chapter. Gotta go read more of your *gorgeous* works. Till then I remain...

~The One and Only

"Hear my cries,

Hear my call.

See my pain,

See my fall.

You can't run,

You can't hide,

Close your eyes."

~ Unknown

Sorry, I had to finish this quickly. My cousin was starting to read it. i don't want her to have nightmares. Well, Raija... Ahem. I believe this is the answer to all of those desperate screams of "I Don't." That was kind of... ahem... suggestive. And you thought some of my endings were suggestive! Man. In a few more months you'll be moving in to rated X or something. Violent,too. Of course, the violence is what makes it interesting. My cousin says she'll pay me back. If I never come home, check for my body in my aunt and uncle's basement. I'll probably be pretty well preserved. It's cold enough. Man. That was good. I enjoyed it A LOT. Write more. Write a lot more... I'll see you on Monday!