OOOOOOoo uchihas never lose control huh sasugay?

Lol I love this

can u stop doing that to naruto?

OMFG i can't stop cringing EVERY DAMN TIME U DO THAT TO HIM; i can't help but unwillingly read some sentence every time i touch my phone screen to scroll down once more FOR FUCKS SAKE! DX

i feel... so sorry for that kagebunshinpoor clone,had to see all of that kind of shitty scenes

don't get me wrong,i don't even wanna read it; just scroll all the way to the end

Good story, very good .

Sasuke ploting revenge, it's nothing new .But ploting against... a door ? That's hilarious ! !

Here's my observations . 1 _ Why Sai hasn't report to the Elders that Sasuke was near Konohagakure knowing that he's still a missing nin ? They would have solve his problem . 2 _Why wasn't he more wary when Kakashi told him Sasuke refuse to return since he had learn from his spy mouse that Sasuke had already meet his old teammate , which make ask myself how much informations did he get ? And 3 .Why Sasuke haven't already give him a little taste of Hell with his mangekyou ?

Oh no, this is bad news. Very bad news.

This chapter was not too bad .

Your writing is mint but what the fuck with this weird orgy shit

I. Respect. You. Enough said.

The plotline is not exactly what I'm looking for but your writing style just keeps me clicking the next chapter button agaib and again after I finished reading the current chapter. The way you portray those charac? Huh, they really seem like different people with different attitudes and personality.

Yep. I. Like. You.

HOLY SHIT FRICKIN CRAP ON A CRACKER I THINK I ACTUALLY LOVE YOU
I just read the entire story in one sitting because I just COULDN'T stop!
I especially love how you emphasised on all the emotions when Sai was there, it was absolutely PERFECT I swear I flipped! Oh, not to mention Naruto's reaction to others when he wakes up, and again when he finds out what happened, I'm at a loss for words. I want to write so much, on so many tiny details, you have no idea, I am mentally screaming right now (because I won't actually be seen doing that, ever) but I think I'll stop harassing you like a "rabid fangirl".
Thank you so much for such an incredible story. I hope you continue to write such amazing works.

There dead

AHHHHHHH I LOVE THIS STORY! Reading the sainaru was the most disturbing thing ever... I punched the wall a couple times, sai is like one of those "oh my god i love this guy so much i manipulate and control him in the name of luuuv" guys. I really liked the ending soo cute XD SASUNARU NARUSASU FOREVER

Too much sainaru hufft

I, am going to make my very first public opinion about yaoi here. I dislike it to an extreme extent due to the principality of it, if you can go around talking openly about men going balls deep into other men then why can I not go around talking openly about women fucking with other women and not get called a pervert?