Too lazy to sign in but OMG still one of my top fave fanfics. Well written and my eyes always burns with tears

Nada a dizer, além de: simplismente lindo

Wow! So beautiful! I really enjoyed this. Write more please.

What a perfect one-shot. A beautiful picture of the Weasley family. I'm so glad that Harry's rule was circumvented in this case. You write skillfully.

super love this

Poor Harry :( Looks like things might be looking up for him though.

Wow! I super love this and wishing that its longer. Please write some more h/g fanfics

This is so sweet. But also really depressing. It doesn't matter though. All that matters that they were fine(:

i almost want to say "ginny you shouldn't make us worry like that" but then again she isn't real but only in the role she plays in ever mention of her. loved it

Beautiful! Very touching. I really think you captured Harry just right.

This story is amazing! I love Harry's entire angsty thought process- the part about the name Ginny and Harry chose for the baby, and the fact they decided to buy a house in Godric's Hollow was actually a bit amusing...even though it's supposed to be sad and angsty as well, which it was. It was kinda like, "Oh God no, not that too..."

It was also relieving just to see that no one actually dies in this story...you would almost expect one of them too, just by the tone of the first couple of paragraphs, but I'm happy! No one died! YAY.

That was such a good story! I re-read it a couple times before deciding to write a review..

My belief (and what my father always told me) is that there are three parts to an excellent story:

1. There's an interesting plot. Check.

2. The writer conveys the emotions through their words and characters. Check.

3. And the third bullet is lost on me! I have a feeling it has to do with grammar- correct tenses and spelling-nothing that makes the reader cringe. I'd say you're pretty good on the last one, the exception being a few minor mistakes but nothing too bad;)

Id love to see this become a two-(or three)-shot!

~Cherry

Pitch-perfect, as always.

I loved the way you opened this - the list (not to mention your mysteriously introducing it with "the first time") gets us hooked. And the paragraph a little further down that touches on how each Weasley is reacting to the situation really hits the nail on the head. Every single character's actions fit. They make sense. They're just what the characters WOULD do. And they're just what people, any people, would do in this sort of predicament. It makes the scene vividly real and infuses it with a palpable tension. The reader gets the sense that something is very, very wrong and that Harry is NOT OKAY without even knowing, yet, what the problem is. The way that Harry blames himself, too, his self-accusation that he was "tempting fate," it's wonderful to read, in that it's so Harry, yes, but even more in that it's so well done. And the denouement - how do you convey emotion so well? How do you do it? This is amazing. This story can't have been more than a few pages long, but I was completely invested in it. Only complaint? Proofread, please. But I loved reading this.

Molivline xoxo

that was so good u should make a story

that was so good u should make a story