what will happen at their date are they even going to go

What will happen on their date are they even go

Omg. I can't believe it stopped here. This world is so cruel! The mystery of why Yami acted the way he did and why the teacher acted that way towards Yami damn! I wish I could know why *cries* and that date I bet it would have been so cute. It was good while it lasted!

I enjoyed the story so far, full of romance and fluff. Too bad it halted here, for it has potential.

This is a really fantastic fic! I loved the characterisations, everyone was so fascinating and interesting to read about! Yami especially had my attention, he was just so mysterious and exciting. The style of writing is really nice too, coupled with things told through Yugi's POV it's done really well!
It's been quite a while, but should you ever return to this fic, I'd be excited to see what is yet to come! I understand though, life is tough and jobs and uni/school can totally mess up the motivation to write and leave you feeling drained. Still, good luck to you with your life! Thank you for writing this, it was all such a pleasure to read!
-Ashe

Its a good story! Love it so far!

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo why didn't you finish even though it was a really good chapter

Lovely stuff. Your good. The kind of good that is rare here. I hope you keep writing I want to keep reading. Also I would like some more explanation on why Yami loves Yugi. Thats all for now keep getting better.

I feel like, next chapter, if there even is a next one Yugi would be crying probably because of how disconnected things are now. If this was natural selections than their relationship would be dead by now. They barely know each other, Yugi seems a little too awkward to want to know anything beyond what he does, it's a good story but when that leaves me wanting more information and emotion. There's really isn't much character development and I think that can be a way for you to make a come back. Yami's well off, Yugi has no other real ambitions then games, the shop, his friends, his grandpa's well being and Yami, there's mystery yes, but in 27 chapters without any hints or development I think I can safely say the story needs some fire work kind of spice. Your a great writer and I believe in your abilities but be creative and let your characters come to life instead of being lost puppets. I'm rooting for you, and I hope you continue to update. The worlds a busy place but when there's something to be done you make the time and learn from your time management. Thank you for writing and Have an Icy Day!

-IcexIcuo

You've been hit by...a smooooth criminal!

continue please

Aw man. I want more! This is just a fantastic story!

i know it's almost been a year since you last updated, but PLEASE continue! this is one of the BEST puzzleshipping stories out there. i really love this story! PLEASE continue it!

Having read this again a year after I first read it, I feel the exact same kind of disappointment as I did when I realized you hadn't updated, and now it's almost been a year since that! Gah! Way to leave us in the lurch like that :'(
I think several people along with myself will have to tie you up and kidnap you until you update. BABY, COME BACK! :'O

Aww, damn. This is one of the best puzzleshipping fanfics out there. I know the last update was almost a year ago, but I'm still hoping for the next chapter... This is too amazing to be discontinued.