You got my eyes damp because of this. Really funny. Reminds me of my sibling as well.

Wow! Great job! You know, you've ogtta feel a little sorry for Aku, since his brother is very... Dumb. Great job, Shenloken! You get an artist watch from me! _

Baku turning into a dumpy pelican and flying away . if I'd been drinking milk, frankly, it would have shot out my nose. This was hysterical, and sweet, and appropriately "played big." I am a Jack lover, but the part with the Scotsman repeatedly beaning him was very funny. (Three Stooges all the way.) I loved Baku. I loved that Aku was *annoyed* by Baku. "Gotta go splat, back to the cat, Salami Jack!" Hee hee! Great job! If you get inspired, by all means, write more. :D

OH this is wunderfull that i wish for a sequel. I LOVE IT

this is great. i hope you continue

Dear god, that was funny the bunny..and stuff! Whooo! Write more soon! CAn't wait to read the last chapter!

Baku, the master of miso soup, The deliverer of pizza, The shogun of sushi. Kicking. Baku made me topple off my chair. I'll have a freaking laugh-trip reading this fic.

*crying from laughter, wiping face, clapping hands* This is awesome. You HAVE to write more. I think the "idiotic brother" thing hits home for anyone with a sibling. Certainly got me into it! :D

Oh My God. ROTFLMAO. That was great! I'm going to read chapter two. ;)

*lol* oh lord i was laughing so hard,i kinda feel bad for aku;) btw, your free to use cicelix if ya want.

Sweet, god this is still so funny. i can't wait for the next chapter

Wow, this is great! Will Jack fall for Aku's plot, or will Baku mess it up somehow? (I'm betting the latter one since it makes more sense.)I must know the answers! Keep writing!

And please, if you could, read my story, too?

I think Aku had more to fear from Baku than he does from Jack! ehehehehehehehehe... By the way, did you know that a 'baku' is actually a Japanese mythological creature that eats dreams? Just figured I'd tell you that... great and silly story! Keep at it!

Whoa Shen, that sounds awesome, I'm ready to put it on my site soon! :D Heh, at least you get more credit than I do for my work... got my email m8? ;)

*lol* you were kidding when you said baku was an idoit:) i starting feel bad for the guy.

cicelix: i thought tortureing him was MY job.

hush you! on any case,write more! :)