This story is awesome, diamond in the middle of covid-19. Even though i held little hope for the continuation, i still wish for it from the depth of my heart. Good job author! I hope one day this will continue

I want naruto x Mamori

Man i hope if you’re done with thhis that some one takes up this story i love it so much and if you plan to continue hope you finish and make a new chapter soon

really amazing story, hope you will update it.

Aaand ive re read this story for god knows how many time, love it !

okay. this fic is on hiatus or abadon.

so cheesy.

well i cant get why he have to live in th
e street when he can just use hes ninja ability to have job..these is fucking stupid

I don't know what you are complaining about. There are literally no other stories where Naruto can use jutsu and play American Football at the same time. Every other story also strips Naruto's powers away so he can't kill the President's son with a Rasengan and start an international incident or you know... be the best simply for having chakra.

i cant believe i didn't find this sooner, since im a fan of Naruto and eyeshield 21 but i never expected a crossover, much less a good one like yours..

I hope you post new chapters someday even though its unlikely, but this is getting too good...

meh, having chakra have nothing to do with physical condition or at least no after you have gained one...Naruto himself is the very example of this... Even when he had jounin like chakra lvls his physical condition was of a genin at the beginning of the serie. So having chakra doesnt influence your physical condition so much unless youre actively using it to power up yourself, but Ninjas in general could do superhumans feat without using it and Naruto fron the valley of the end had a superhuman physical condition

Well, i dont know were this is going to go... Even if Naruto lost his ability of using chakra, his physical condition is still superhuman or have the potential to become superhuman if he got rusty, so much that he easily can run circles against Sena even End manga if he trains himself.

You did mention in chapter 1 that you weren't going to include any character from Naruto.

Is this discontinued?

yo. I love the story so far. really unique idea, though i'm wondering when and how Naruto and sasuke got to that world. I don't think you were too clear on that.

also i'd like to point out a few errors if I may?
first in 25 you misspelled hirumas name throughout the chapter. and in 26 you messed up the score a lil. you had it at 30-36 then sena scores and it's still 30-36. I realize the score was mostly an oversite, but I thought I should tell you.

other than that... keep writing pls. can't wait for next chapter.
laters.