J'aime.

amazing story

Wow, you really go into Gohan's anger issues. He's a berserker. Repress, repress, explode! Very interesting match.

I love your fights

Yeah, Toriyama used to include all the finalist matches, so I think its fun that you do too. But after Lanfan I thought Chi-chi was a finalist. Enjoying the story and the matches!

Then to everyones surprise, it was Vegeta who raised the ante even further. "Fifty zenni and one of Bulmas bras says the brat beats him with a dodge and a kick," he added, bringing a mortified expression to Bulma and a lovesick expression to Oolong and Roshi. "Youre on!" Both announced in unison.

XD

It's not a bad story, my only concern is you max different dialogue in one paragraph. Although, this was years ago and you improved since then

Bulma slapping Maste Roshi, love it XD

This whole story is interesting, bringing the Z fighters closer together with others like Zangya

I loved it!

You have some great stories. Keep up the good work!

good fantastic actually, except ,i thought gohan would have won easily like vegeta mentions wen teen gohan was fighting dabura, that if gohan was as strong as he was when he beat cell, then he could have finished him off,.. but ur story isnt complete is it.. sequel perhaps

very good

HENTAI FREAKS!

i will read the next right away

-Dansama

Another great chapter in the Hybrid Theory universe. I think this was the best one yet, by far. I liked your writing style when I first read Hybrid Theory, and it's getting better as the saga goes on.

Anyway, there were far too many great moments in the fic to comment on them all, but the bit with Krillin and Juuhachi-gou was absolutely perfect. I could actually see it happening in my mind completely as I read it. Wonderful work.

Ciao

The Rev.

Yeah Gohan! Kick that sorry pink b*******'s a** into next Tuesday! *cheers and waves a "Go Gohan!" flag*