Awww, All tickles and fluffy stuff! :D MAKE MORE.

I actually enjoyed this little story! I love short, sweet one-shots!

Only suggestion is that you should capitilize the letter I. It would make your story look a little bit more professional...:)

Hasn't been beta'd? Considering I was about to suggest one until I read the A/N at the bottom, that explains a lot.

Why you wanted it out 'fresh,' I don't think I'll be able to understand.

It's a fluff piece. Not terribly original, but I don't think that's necessarily a reader's top priority when they read one of these. I'll be interested to see if you incorporate something original or put an interesting spin on things in the future though.

If you do end up writing a series of one shots, particularly if they're the same length as this one, PM me if you need a beta.