Sigh. What a lovely chapter. You know, although I was happy with the story as it was, now with this newest chapter, I hope that you will someday take it even further along as that t.b.c. implies that you might. Rest assured that I'll be waiting when you do!

This is so sweet and sexy! I'm glad I stumbled across it, Nunewesen. I am an utter fool for Holmes using Watson's Christian name in bed. Lovely, lovely.

So good, I stopped breathing at times.

This is an amazing story. You are quite possibly the only person who writes in first-person whose fics I love so much. They feel in character and it's believable. Keep up the great work and thank you for writing this awesome fic!

Ahhh! I need more! Please write some more, you're really talented xoxo

You are a really good writer, these are fab! REALLY great job xoxo

i love that you killed off mary :D xoxo

Nicely ending to some delicious stuff. Can't wait for the next chapter

"For Heaven's sake, Watson, I love –"

"Mr. Holmes! What a surprise!"

Wasn't gonna comment until the end, but oh god––the frustrated noise I made was not human! XD

Auf Wiedersehen!
- Naomi Hansen

This is a wonderful and a charming story. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Keep on writing. -Lup

oh i love love love love love LOVE this. 3

mas, por favor!

luv it!

such a charming story. it is a pleasure to read, and i am truly looking forward to the next chapter.

:)

I love this chapter!
You take my breath away.. that was so wonderful! You just make me fall in love with Holmes even more.. :)