It was good

I want more is what I need, not think!

Oh mah gahd

I like it! But come on, who wouldn't? This is awesome...now I just need to watch prototype or whatever game Alex is from. I know what he looks like but haven't seen game play. But anyway awesome, keep it up!

wanting more please!

I love your work! please continue!

Dont be scared, its wonderful _

Awesome

*drool*
Please sir, may I have some more?

(Uhhh... Well some how my phone likes to send incomplete reviews -.-)

Anywaaays continuing on from where I left off... I dont know if you were planning on continuing the story before hand but, as I said before I think, I see great things for this story :)
If ever you need help for an idea or two or anything of any sort, I'd be happy to aid :)

This fiction is so sweet, I think I just might have diabetes now. I love how involved Alex is in the story, he seems like a dynamic character now ( where as in other fictions Ive read, he usually follows one casting or blueprint but in this story... He actually has a life xD)
Needless to say, I REALLY this you should continue this story! ( im not sure if you were plann

Alex and Des making out in the shower? Mh, just three words: I. Am. Done. *awkward fangirl screaming* ...anyway...that was really good :D

There are these things called paragraphs, and I really dont understand why so many people don't understand how to use them properly- it's very hard to read in blocks.
Other then that it's great.

me encanto!
me gusto mucho este fic
y muy buen lemon ;)

MOAR! :D