again this story suffers a lot from mpdg trope but i guess that’s one of the dangers of being inside a teenage white guy in the suburbs’ brain. i don’t give a shit though! i love it! i’ll read it as a satire if i must but it makes me feel happy. everything feels like a build-up to a fucking heartbreak and i wouldn’t even be bothered to be angry. eddieboy needs to get his shit together and not depend on miss mpdg’s presence. he needs to build himself up, not around her but beside her. and bella needs to fucking confront her parents. i feel it coming and i hope it will be satisfactory. i want to see bella humanized. i want to see behind her curtain of rainbow and ugly ass cat ear beanies. she needs to shed these accessories to address her issues, because she has huge ones despite her Wise Uncle Iroh From Avatar Schtick. she needs to be a teenage girl and just stop building up eddieboy. they need to grow together. and they need to do it apart, so they can see themselves clearer without attaching their identity to each other. anyway i fucking love this, bro. i fucking love it. and it’s 2020.

Just want to pop in and say I still love this story and hope you're still writing, even if it's not Twific. The world needs your words! Anyway. Okay. If this is weird I apologize but also... sorrynotsorry. (had to logout since I already reviewed this chapter... semantics.)

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You have an amazing 'voice' and writing style. I hope you are out there doing well. Thank you for sharing your talents with us. Much appreciated!

I cannot believe I am just finding this work. Your words are mesmerizing. I love the way you casually, (seemingly) effortlessly capture the internal monologue of a teenage boy while simultaneously painting such a vivid picture of high school and personalities and situations. Dang! Thank you for sharing your talents.

damn, ed.

this chapter is as messy as i imagine my own teenage yrs were, too, lmao.

I decided to read again a few of my favorite stories, ended up reading your summer camp lst week and missed your words so much that I came to your profile hunting a new story. Water Landing is yet again another one of my favorites and your words are funny and touching. Please update and finish it this asap. Their story deserve to be told and their lives celebrated. I look forward to an email alerting that you have updated. Hope all is great with you and your!

Are you going to complete this story? It looks really good but not without an ending. Please.

Mickey

Hey dear! Are you still writing this story? Please say yes! I'd love to read at least another chapter
Saludos )

Loving this there's more to be told I know it wish you. Did too

Just finally got around to reading this. So good! I'm hoping you will finish it at some point. There are plenty who will be thrilled whenever you are able to post more. Hope all is well with you and yours. Thanks!

I really enjoyed this but wish it was completed.

Thanks,

Hope you can update, your story is so good, funny too:)

Update please? I hope you haven't abandoned this cuz i really love these guys...