I wish you would make more of this this is a really great story in fact my favorite

Please wright more of this :)

Please write more of this i love it! 3

Please update this fIc! I want to know if Arthur and Alfred get ti hav babies together and will Arthur stay with the Jones? Who is Yao in a relationship with? Ivan? I hope its him da! J kolkolkolkolkol

Please update! It was REALLY good!

Update soon please & thank you

update soon!

What would a crazy person do? Oh right,

*slams against whavter screen you are looking at. Face is smushed against the wall* UPDATE NOW!

You should get a beta as spelling mistakes really takes the fun out of such an awesome fic! Make this an mpreg k?

If you still need a beta, I'll be more than happy to oblige. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Please update!~ I wanna see what happens next!~ :3

nice story, hope you update soon:)

AH! I loved this!

Please do make this a Mpreg! It would be so lovely!,And ive never seen a Mpreg/mermaid fanfic before,it would very intereting to see!

Hey~

Just wanted to say that I love your story so far! It's off to a great start and I hope you continue writing! I love how you kept everyone's personalities intact and the USUK. I love the USUK! I am also hoping to see some certain mermen *cough*Romano and Veneciano*couch* pair up with some land dwelers ;) I love the plot and can't wait to see how their relationship will improve! So will Artie be having legs soon? :O Le gasp~

Oh yeah, definently an M-preg, but you might want to make up some mermaid thing and why it's possible and all that. And have a live-birth like th comment below says :) eggs and c-sections just aren't the same...

I love your story and I'm really looking forward to the upcoming chapters, but you might want to consider editing your work a bit. Don't get me wrong, I still admire your story, but the grammatical errors really disturbs the flow of the piece. I thought that I should let you know, bad grammar and incorrect spelling will turn off most readers, and I really want more people to read your story...This decision is entirely up to you, if you fix it great, if you don't I'll keep reading your story!

Anyways, I'll review with my account (later) and keep up the good work! :D

I love this! You should so make it an mpreg, but one with live birth, no eggs or c-sections.