| Reviews for A Temporary Surrender of Temperance |
|---|
Zoeylicious chapter 1 . 4/18/2013 Awwhhh! So sweet! I love this story :') |
pinkus-pyon chapter 1 . 1/26/2013 i like your fic T.T |
oOKaKuroShipperOo chapter 1 . 11/7/2012 This is so awesome I love you Thanks for writing this :) I have read the Vietnamese Ver and enjoyed so much... This is the 10th time I have read it. |
LiveLifeAudaciously chapter 1 . 7/5/2012 I don't like you... you almost made me cry with your amazing writing skills! Dx But this story is one of my favorite 1827 angst fics, it was so nicely written. The last line just broke my heart T_T But thanks for writing such a great story :) |
The Lone Empress of Hell chapter 1 . 3/30/2012 ...you know..., this the 5th time that i have read something like this...and heck it's feels sad... |
Rising Cielo chapter 1 . 12/11/2011 One of the greatest 1827 fiction I've ever read in a while! I love how you write about Hibari's feeling. It's rare to find one like this. I must say... painfully sweet :) Keep up the good work! |
djodjo chapter 1 . 12/10/2011 WOW I CAN ONLY SAY THAT IT'S PAINFULY SWEET. |
animemichy chapter 1 . 12/6/2011 OMG ! heartbreaking ! hehehehe love the story ! |
BlackStar42Roses chapter 1 . 12/1/2011 The ending surprised me a little! I didn't think that Tsuna would die in the end...it's so tragic ); BUT. I like how you portrayed Hibari. I know everyone thinks he's a hardass and a closed off bastrd all the time, but the way you described his thoughts tied in very well with the story, and really, if Hibari didn't want to, he would have never bothered to associate himself with Tsuna and the others anyway. So what you wrote made perfect sense to me. I love it. It's great :D |
rachel-chanx3 chapter 1 . 12/1/2011 Wow, this is the first fanfic I've actually read in a long time and I'm kinda surprised! I left a couple months ago because the stories seemed to be progressively getting worse, but this is sososo good! Firstly, I loved then 10-year-later setting and how it was Italy. That was nice. I liked seeing Tsuna and Hibari all grown-up. :') What was interesting was that they were still fighting Byakuran. :0 Secondly, I loved Reborn in adult form. So... mature and suave, haha, a total contrast to his typical baby form personality. Thirdly, I loved the feel of the story. Kind of solemn... somber, almost painful... I don't know how to put it. I just enjoyed it a lot. Your writing's really good! (and grammar, which is kind of a huge plus!) You did an amazing job~! :) |
Emotive Gothika chapter 1 . 11/29/2011 This was all sorts of hot and romantic and sad and flangtsy! "When Tsuna was moaning and writhing under his touch, gasping in pleasure as Hibari thrust into him, claiming him, coming inside of him, Hibari felt as if his whole world was burning in Tsuna's flame." That scene right there was as hot as the flames that burns Hibari's world! Nicely done! Had me fanning my face even though it only implied hot and steamy intimacy! XD And even though you're only dipping your feet into KHR right now, you'll soon find yourself jumping off that twenty-foot high diving board and diving smoothly into the water with nary a flaw! You have that much potential! Characterizations were spot on, grammar and spelling flawless, prose was perfect, and the emotional capacity that your words induce unto a reader just makes a heart burst in that overwhelmingly good way! All in all, a great fic! Keep it up! 8D |
Redd Night chapter 1 . 11/28/2011 TAT Ack! Such a good 1827 angst story! I loved everything about it, seriously. Reborn and Hibari's interaction felt very real. I loved the moments with Hibari and Tsuna- especially the part when Hibari couldn't bring himself to say, "to death". The last part of the story was really good to. Good job- very good job. :) Hope you write more 1827~ |
Me-Anne chapter 1 . 11/27/2011 Awww... sniff sniff... Oh well, Tsuna didn't die really! (_) Nicely done. Everyone is IN Character no matter how small their part is. You capture the essence of Tsuna and how him and Hibari could work. Here's hoping you would splurge some more in this universe. |