| Reviews for First Kiss on the Ferris Wheel |
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   OodleNoodle chapter 1 . 6/14/2013 This was pretty good! I'm so glad to find another AmeCan supporter! UsUK drives me nuts, but that's probably because I prefer FrUk. ._. |
| Kuro Shiro Sama-Sama chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 This is great. I have nothing else to say. It's just really good. :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2012 I suggest using a spelling/grammar check before submitting this, because there were quite a few mistakes, as well as a thesaurus, because the word choices were rather dull and repetitive. Furthermore, you may want to watch how you write the characters, because it was OOC in a lot of places. |
| konneh eats ants chapter 1 . 4/24/2012 Omg your story is awesome I love it.. Keep on writing ;) |
| xxicexxlostsoulyahoo.com chapter 1 . 1/14/2012 I love this couple! Great job writing it :D You should right more USCAN and I totally agreed with the USUK thing, I hate that couple. |
| Alexandra chapter 1 . 1/3/2012 Omg. LET ME LOVE YOU. I can't stand USUK either _ I used to love the but now I ship AmeriCanada (yes, that's what I call it). And I like how Alfred bribed the ferris wheel guy xD ...the fact that I liked the sex scene goes without saying. |
| Ice-Kun Ryuzaki chapter 1 . 12/18/2011 -covers nose from massive nosebleed- *A* |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2011 Work on grammar and ooc-ness. Spelling and word confusion also run rampant. Word choice is dull. |
| ali chapter 1 . 12/4/2011 Oh wow... nng that was hot. |
| Silverflower8910 chapter 1 . 12/1/2011 Wow this is one of the most detailed and well written yaois I've read! There were some spelling mistakes though, for example, it is spelt "Ferris Wheel". Great job though! :) |
| protag-kun chapter 1 . 11/28/2011 :D my goodness! This was really well writen! 3 |
| ProdigiousGirl chapter 1 . 11/27/2011 (gasp) Did you just say you're anti-USUK! (hugs you) Kindred soul! I'm glad I'm not the only one...it's seriously overrated. Anyway, aside for a few noticeable grammar mistakes I'd say this fic was definately well-paced and well worth the read. Some of Canada's more aggressive lines (at the beginning of their sexual experience) surprised me, but it's a fanfic...anything can happen! Hope to read another AmeCan fic from you in the future. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2011 This was so cute! (and hot) I absolutely loved this and please, please, please, write more! |
| Omygilbert chapter 1 . 11/27/2011 . THIS! You, mon ami (or however you spell it), win the internet. All that I would like to see is Mattie being more innocent during the sex-scene. He was kinda ooc saying he was 'naughty' when he's the most innocent country...ever. It was awesome anyway though! I'd also like a France x Canada from you, I think your writing might be better with that pairing. With Love, Daniel |
