| Reviews for Liberation Chronicle: Starting a Force |
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   ARXENIX 2.0 chapter 6 . 7/21 ...!DANTA MADRE ESO FUE ESPECTACULAR!... AL FIN SE DEMOSTRÓ QUE LOS NOBLES NO SON INVENSIBLES... JAJAJAJA...ADORO ESTE FUC 100... |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/21/2018 Good story. |
| 0730 chapter 6 . 1/10/2018 Keep going very good so far |
| Assistant Elite General Matteo chapter 2 . 10/18/2017 Come on, continue this comrade |
| ProseToPages chapter 6 . 7/16/2017 I believe the fourteen tanks bit and Agnes' new crush. The rest is ridiculous xD Update pls? Pretty pls? I have ice cream. |
| ProseToPages chapter 5 . 7/16/2017 That seems to be WAY too much ammunition for a small force to produce. I'm calling bullshit. Other than that, still ok. |
| ProseToPages chapter 4 . 7/16/2017 A very rare exception for fast paced stories indeed. FUCK THE PLOT LET'S GET TO THE GOOD SHIT! |
| ProseToPages chapter 3 . 7/16/2017 This breached the integrity of my willing suspension of disbelief and jeopardized my immersion... ...to hilarious levels. What the fuck just happened?! XDDDD Deus Ex Machina decided to open up again! |
| ProseToPages chapter 2 . 7/16/2017 I've never been fond of fast paced stories, but this is a extremely rare exception. Aside from somewhat questionable phrasing, it doesn't break my immersion and willing suspension of disbelief is intact. The phrasing is "military" sounding enough, I suppose. |
| ProseToPages chapter 1 . 7/16/2017 Lmao just instantly rally, come up with a silly name a 10 year old COD player would use and march onto chapter 2. Pacing was fast, good grammar except for "Fast mobility" as it should be "high mobility". Eh, plausible. Naïve, excited villagers make for excellent conscript. |
| 56006 chapter 6 . 2/18/2015 Whats PTSD? Great story you've made here |
| Rex chapter 6 . 10/25/2014 Awsome love it so much have no idea how the guns look but i can imagine keep it up |
| coronadomontes chapter 6 . 1/4/2014 Este fanfic es maravilloso, increible mas capitulos por fabor |
| MODERN ARMED FORCE chapter 6 . 6/25/2013 Great story update soon |
| aznxa21 chapter 6 . 6/19/2013 Interesting how you did the story too bad you aren't updating it anymore. |
