That was a perfect first time for them.

This was written amazingly. I have run on to a lot of writings that looked as if they had no effort put into them, they were written by a 9 year old and the personality of the character was not understood so the writer could not capture it. This writing however was anything but what I had just described. The effort put into this to make it great was beyond amazing. The things that were said in this is something that the writer of the show would have the characters say. This writing grabbed me emotionally and I didn’t want to let go. I am conflicted with happiness and sadness that I have finished it. Happy that the ending was perfect and sad that there is no more to read. This will definitely be a writing I come back to read over and over again.

Not only was Maura heard, but Jane as well. Gotta love Rizzles!

i skimmed every paragraph of Maura's dreams because i couldnt read them! Even skimming the words made me cry and want to throw up! I commend you for making me feel like that because that means that this story is very well written! Amazing story! Jane being Maura's hallucination to get out was fantastic! Sasha does have a Rack Of God! Could stare at them all day!

R&I is still my favorite show. I have all seven seasons on amazon. I start with season one and just let it play through all seven and then start it all over again and let it play while I do other things. This is my second time reading this. My granddaughter told me about fan fiction about six months ago. And not long after I read this. After I read the rape scene, I was hurt! How could anyone hurt Maura. I even considered not finishing the rest of the story. But, I did and I'm so glad I did. I didn't even know how to comment!. Anyway, I just read it again and inspite of the violence is a sweet tender and wonderful when Jane makes love to Maura, you could not have done a better job. Thank you for sharing a beautiful story. I've said it before, It should be law that Jane and Maura should end up together

Exceptionally well-written! I read the whole story in one sitting...

Thank you for this very well written story. Many portions were difficult to read but necessary to the storyline. I will now look for more of your stories.

well after reading this i think this is a sure fire winner of an award if not i dont know wat is it ticks all th boxes imo very well writen going through all emotions and feelings and still breathing thats gotta win something lol

revenge it sounds like for wat paddy has done

janes always been there for maura

good first chapter i like the way you describe maura and her situation shes in

I love so many thing about this story. The characterization of Maura and Jane is spot on. But, I would pay a large sum of money to have seen that dirty Robber scene on the show! It was hilarious. Bravo!

Beautiful fanfic, beautifully written.

OMG, this story was amazing, and wonderfully written
Thankyou.

That was a wonderfully written fanfic.. heart renching but very well written.. nice job!