i love this story please continue

Oh my god please update . I love this hope you continue i love his families reactions to his super spy awesomeness

pls update! (maybe skip some chapters...so they can get through all the books?) this is really good...but please don't take a year for chp 11! good luck with college...I love writing essays, as long as its an interesting topic...I mean, who doesn't XD...

woah...it felt as though (I really was) reading sooo fast, just like Helen. Great description, amazing ideas!

Amazing

It's very nice. Its one of the best fan fiction I have read till now. I hope you come back and update the next chapter. Please do update...its realllllyyyyyy gooooodddd...
I really wanted to read more...

I really love this story! Please continue soon!

This is the best Alex rider fan fiction I've ever read, I really hope you continue it, you have my full support.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I do hope you continue and update very and I mean very soon.

Alex is like Harry! Lokks like his father, has his mothers eyes. Fabgirling so hard. Ha. Meant to write fangirling but fabgirlings cool too.

I think your a great writer. I know you haven't touched this in a long time but I hope you come back to it. I have some ideas. You could do 3 more chapters on the first book. Then one for each of the next. Making sure you cover Albert bridge, ie the books are the reason John volunteers; Ash, their reaction; then with the final one you could have them all decide it has to happen as it did in the book but that they fake their deaths n are waiting for Alex in America. They could have gotten Yassen on side to fake it all ect. And share the books and how they watched him grow up n go through his missions from afar. Believing that millions of lives he saved demanded the sacrifice. Perhaps they could have been surgically altered n stayed in his life at a distance, ie Helen was the school secretary miss Bedfordshire?
Anyway. Good pick n stick with it! :)

I love your story and I can't wait until you do the other books!

Wow! this is great so far! I love 'reading the books' fics and you have the most progress so far out of all that I've seen in the Alex Rider fandom, and your dialogue and reactions seem very realistic to me. I'm going to keep reading, that's for sure!

I want chapter 11! TT_TT It's sooooooooooo goooooooooooood!

UPDATE!