Your writing is good, but he had sex with her while she was unconscious. That’s rape. It’s stories like these that put a negative light on the fandom.

You were right. Very happy.

awww super cute story!

Beautiful story

I really really loved that story, I know, you posted it a few years ago and I‘m not sure you even read this- but if you do: thank you very much!

Lovely story, thank you so much!

Adorable! Lovely to read, well done!

I have read this story so many times I can't even count. Its one of the best severity and marriage law fix ever...Love it.

This is sooo good

Loved the fic. Read it in one session. As for the labor, man I am jealous of the lucky ladies with the quick labors... both my kids were 19 hours of hard labor. All the negative reviewers should take things lighter, this is fanfic, we are all fans here. If you don't like it don't read it. Simple as that.

I loved your story! I couldn't stop reading it

The last Chapter made me cry! Loved the sorry brilliant ending, just what I wanted to read, Severus slowly over the years becoming more and more softer. Great Story! Well Done!

Oh my gosh.. Did i felt the warm tears rolling on my cheeks? I was deeply touch at the last chapter.. Thank you its a wonderful story

I didn't read your AN at the top (too excited for the story I guess). So I spent 10 minutes trying to figure out Fionnlagh. That time includes various google searches. Eventually I gave up and that's when I saw the AN, lol.

Anyway, I'm diggin the story so far!

awwww so sweet