Completely unreadable.

This was a wonderful story and the second I have read where the Dragonborn ends up needing rescued. I enjoyed this from beginning to end. I especially liked how you deviated from the game and made the quest line your own.

a very great story... love your Idalyn and your Vilkas! So much love for you 3

Idalyn seems to be quite a marysue. You write well but Idalyn is such a crappy character.

This story made me really happy, thank you so much for writing this!
I admittedly squealed through more chapters than I'd care to admit.
It is such a good work, and immensely enjoyable!

I absolutely loved this your wonderful story, I love the madness of the character Vilkas and you gave birth to him in a wonderful way! Your Idalyn is sweet, but also strong! They are a beautiful couple and I love the way you describe the hot surfaces! I hope someday you can write another little short story, with Vilkas!

I'm not too proud to admit that when I was lazily skimming through the Elder Scrolls section and spotted one of my favorite author's name on a story, I squealed like a total fangirl. Beautiful writing, as ever, and I'm quite pleased to have found this story, even if I'm about 5 years late to the party.

*Sniff...Sniff...* I-I'm not crying over how beautiful this story is...I'm stron-...Oh forget it.

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

(BY THE WAY, GREAT STORY! YOU ARE TALENTED, MY FRIEND! :D :D :D)

Loved it

I actually liked this story much more than I thought I would! Personally, I favour Farkas, but Vilkas is a close second! Welldone!

That was definitely worth the nights sleep I just exchanged for it. It was beautiful, emotional, and just overall a wonderful masterpiece. Great work my dear. See ya.

I spent all day yesterday reading this and it was well worth it! I loved it :)

Love love love this story. Especially how your altered the events of the companion's quest line to make it your own. Well written and thoughtful, I hope to see perhaps a sequel.

I just ADORE this story! It is well-written, exciting, suspenseful, and romantic; all the good stuff that makes a story enjoyable. I was hooked since the beginning, and I am very fond of your character Idalyn. I love how you portrayed Vilkas and all the companions. You made them unique and life-like, while still sticking to their in-game personalities. Brava! This will always be one of my favorite skyrim fanfics. Keep writing!

Awesome story, gonna look up what you got and mayb you :)