This was such a sweet story! It’s hard to find a well written LND story so I thank you for this! The biggest problem with LND’s plot was that many of the characters (Raoul, Madame Giry, Meg) were out of character but your story explained how those ten years had changed them and it made more sense. I loved how you redeemed Madame Giry and even Raoul here (even though I’m not fond of the fop.) I thought your characterization of Christine in this story was so on point with Sierra’s version of the character and a redeemed Erik was also refreshing to see and again not something fully explored in the play. Brava!

Very sweet story and glad they finally got the family they wanted. Brilliant writing.

This was a beautifully sweet story that finally gave them that happy ending. So glad they are together and the baby was a great surprise to Erik. Beautifully written. Keep up the good stories.

This was sweet. So sad about meg tho

Beautiful story!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS! After seeing PotO and hating the ending to LND, I needed something like this. I know you wrote this a long time ago, but you're an amazing writer! I'll admit that I stayed up until midnight reading this :)

This is clearly not finished. It sort of just cuts off.

This was amazing please write more some other time

I LOVED IT.
It does not strike me as a M, more like a T. I think you kept everything in great order. I like how you made Raoul take the bullet. It is more believable than Love Never Dies. I never liked the fop but, when you consider his ability to jump into a mess and not look both ways it just seems likely that he would be there for the bullet... I feel sorry for Meg... I really do...
She should have gotten a merit badge for killing Raoul :P
Please keep writing you are good :D

This was a beautiful story. I like it as an alternative to Love Never Dies. Well written, good character development, and romantic as E/C should always be! They have the happiness they deserve. Thanks for this story, Sparks.

Thank you! This has been an amazing read and I have thoroughly enjoyed your plot and the character development :)

Lovely fic. Loved the letters back and forth between all three of them. Nice way of ending with the baby being born and stating the next part of their family.

I LOVED it. I read it all in one night. Glad you made Raoul somewhat better in the end of his life, he wasn't really a bad guy, just stressed beyond belief.

It was really good. Thank you.

AWW this story was perfect! I wish love never dies really did end like this! Great job!

This was wonderful! I don't approve much of the plot ALW developed, but I felt you worked very well with the material and stayed true to both creations of characters. Well done!