I think you know when your'e in love when your heartbeat picks up at the mention of said name, and you swoon...
oh my god.
I'M IN LOVE WITH MAXIMUM RIDE! XD

i likey :D

i said "aww" at the end. really good.

sniff. sniff. :'3 :D I LOVE IT!:D

haha. She punches his face and hugs him. Priceless.

I just had one continuous "awwwwwwww..." for the whole chapter. It was so sweet when they asked everybody what they thought love was.

Wonderful! I love how they ask around the park about love and then they are in love at the end!

I like this better like this. Once I did that,to my best friend, lets call her S. I was like I hate you, you're evil and crazy and insane, then I hugged my CBF so hard we both fell. :)

luved it! 3

aHhhhhhhhh that is so sweet i love the last part where she yells at him then crys and says never leave me agin thats just to good hhehehe

CUTE!

GUESS WHAT? I HAVE A NEW STORY UP!

Haha, it'a a cowrite though... Is this the last chapter?

Aww, really cute.

Little OOC, bot really cute.

Incredibly cute. Of course you can adopt it!

Just my friend, Sketched Hero likes detail, and so I've become very detail-needy.

So do you think when you write you could strive for more detail, with the same amount of conversation? If so, that'd be awesome!

Well... PM me I guess.

Haley

I thought aw. If I said it I woulda gotten in trouble cuz I'm supposed to b asleep.

That was so cute! :D