...if the ministry is denying Voldemort's Resurrection, why are they going after a supposed death eater? especially given the fact that Cho would have been far too young to have joined him during his first reign.

to say nothing of the fact that now voldemort knows definitively that "rex chase" is connected to harry in some way.

...if this "Kitty Nightmare" is the same age or younger than Harry, how exactly did she run away from her death eater parents? she would have been an infant when Voldemort died, if she were alive at all.

also, from what i recall of this series, your version of the order of the phoenix is reformed on a cyclical basis, how do they have agents in place when they don't exist?

you also never explained why Harry and Ron are suddenly in Ancient Runes. i'll ignore the bit about Vector being the opposite gender she's supposed to be.

...Zabini makes sense, (s)he's from a magical family, but how exactly did they recruit the Creevey's into the Order? they're muggleborn.

also, torturing someone, healing them, then torturing them again is far from kind. it prolongs the person's suffering.

also, the thanks section just confirmed a suspicion of mine. Miranda Flairgold was definitely influenced by this work when she made her own, heh.

it's been...well over a decade since i read these stories, heh. that being said, spite's a rather stupid reason to be making life-changing decisions.

i also think you're underestimating how high ranking a brown belt is in karate, assuming you're not mixing it up with some other martial art.

i also find it rather strange that you apparently have four prefects for gryffindor. are you increasing the number of students from cannon, then?

and why would the typos indicating a french accent be in a letter? a letter is written, not spoken.

Pure and simple crap, helped by a rapist, yeah another crap from rapist lover.

awesome

nice scolding there harry now kill that baka of a minister and take his position

Anothet outstanding story. Thank you for another great ride through fanfiction.

Honestly haven't got a clue how I didn't find this little gem sooner, I'm glad I finally did though!

Just wondering, did you create the leyrie for the story or is it an actual mythical creature? Either way I want to know more about it, so that's why I'm asking.

Krum left school and Karkaroff did a runner

"She's carrying a torch for you higher than the Statue of Liberty!" Love that play! :D

This is good! Love re-reading this.

Sorry, but people don't write with the accents they speak in.

Well done. I'm reading this series for the second