Need to know what happens next here soon with an update.

Hmmm, I may have been hasty with my last review. There's a lot of really odd wording here. Makes for a slightly rough read.

I'm ok with it so far. Think you went a little nuts by making him a genetic grab bag of powers but it's not badly written at least. Did you ever find out what the names of those ranma fics were that you were asking about in the authors notes? I'm kinda curious about them myself after reading your description.

I have to tell you that I have been enjoying this story greatly. I enjoy the pacing as well as the plot. I would not want to be Sinister when the Gunshin family and their allies (and frenemies) get a hold of him.

I would say a good idea for the return to Japan would be some mix of the Hand and random encounters with parts of the Wrecking Crew. I add this last group simply because I could easily see some of them still wanting a piece of Ranma (maybe Kuno is training to be the next Silver Samurai?) Either way the Wrecking crew could help build some rapport with certain females in regards to Ranma.

I would like to say that my bets for Best Girl for Ranma in this universe is currently a a very close race. In the lead (barely) is Jean Grey. You've done a great deal to build a solid rapport between the two and the pairing would be fun to watch. But... I could also see Ranma hooking up with either Kitty (who I would love to see get the attention), Rahne or Betsy.

Also several chapters ago Ranma saved a regal-looking blonde. Was that an Emma Frost reference?

Either way, or even if I am completely wrong in my speculations of pairing, keep writing this story and I shall keep reading it. Keep up the good work.

The idea is nice but some events has left me dislike the story.
Why did you made Logan renma's father.
I can not see this as a way to work with the plot of the story.
You was able to make renma's x gene come from his mother.
Logan powers are not needed for someone like renma who he is a martial arts master on the same level as the iron fist.
You give him many mutants abilities that are not necessary, telepathy, telekinesis are understable but others, no.

Yeah, I'm not a fan of this "true biological father" thing you have going on. Not a fan at all.

Great,Update,You got all the characters right.
Will you Update Rise of the Dark Ones soon? I like to see what happeds to Ron.

Any Chance you do Kim Possible cross with Young Justice?
I love to see Kim and Ron with superpowers,but are not OP.
I also hope it,s only a Kim/Ron Pairing.

This is getting better as it comes along.

So when, pray tell, do we get to see the idiots from Nerima pop back into this story? After all, given how badly Ranma went and damaged Nabiki's operations, there has to be some thirst for payback somewhere; unless she took a stupid pill one morning, it wouldn't take her long to figure out what really happened.

So far up to this point everything which is not directly copy pasted from the Evolution, is just a big pity party for Ranma. Every other paragraph can be summed up as boo hoo, Ranma is moping, a female character is crying over Ranma, or a male character is pitying him. You took away his curse and emasculated Ranma in the same story.

Talk about bringing the heavy hitters. Psylocke ! Even though she doesn't have the raw telepathic or telekinetic might of Professor X, Jean Grey, or Nate Grey her martial arts skills are second only to Logan in the comics and once she shows Ranma how to use her powers to the fullest Ranma will become just as dangerous.

great story, I do not know how I could not find this story before, it's a shame that lorna can not be paired with ranma, but going back to the point I hope ranma is paired with jean and kitty if not both then vote for jean (for sincerely the girl deserves someone better than scott).

incredible story, I caught it by chance and I'm glad to do it, tell me it's possible to pair ranma with jean and kitty, and if it is not possible with the two that is paired with jean.

As always this is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. I eagerly await your next enjoyable chapter. Please continue

First there is story out there with her in it, but only as a guest. It was a Harry Potter X Marvel crossover. Its A third Path, I think is the title where Harry comes into the Marvel universe. But as a main character, your right. I love to see him with Psylock as one of the girls though. Try for a mini harem, but then again its your story and its up to you.

Keep up with the good work.