My one favorite part of the list is him going to Disney Land with Ziva!

I like your own additions on the bucket list ;)

Great story.

Took me long enough to finally read this :DD Loved the whole thing, of course and I'm so glad you wrote the sequel, which I absolutely adore

Finally I could read it! I loved Ziva helping him with the new items! It would be nice if you could teach them(and me - because to have class w/ Tony and Ziva would be amazing) chinese...

Really loved it sis!

3 Hati

I love your stories so much:)

They're always the sweetest!

Great job!

Oh, Sophie Mei!

I'm happy you continued this! I love the modified list! :)

This made my night.

My fave list items: 1, 2, 8, 12, 17, 20, 23, 24, 25, and of course, 26! :)

I like this well done!

And how in the whole of Blessed Mother Earth are they going to afford No.9? Unless snotty cousin Crispian passes away and leaves the Paddington millions to Tony... ;p

You wrote! Yay! I enjoyed it muchly. Thanks ever so much for taking the time to share :)

Thanks for including this chapter with your list.

I'm glad you left the ones that really matter. I bought all 8 seasons in December and have been working my way through the entire series again and my husband is watching for the first time. I had forgotten how much Tony changes over the years. The early Tony probably wouldn't consider items like #10, 11, 22.

#18-I'm not sure Tony or Ziva had much of a childhood the first time around. Have you read the story about Tony and Ziva going to Disney World with Tony's family? Just a fun story about everything they do there. Here's the link in case you haven't. s/7382874/1/Youll_Be_In_My_Heart

Looking forward to more stories from you.

Jane

I have a lot of experience encouraging writers. My husband is a professional writer and my 12-year-old is an aspiring one. I may not be very creative myself, but I'm good at feedback and encouragement.

Great job on the emotional part of this chapter. I felt bad for Tony's view of himself.

I think at this point Tony would do anything with Ziva, including learning Chinese, which is a VERY hard language.

Jane

The baseball team one ... do I smell a fic with Tony playing coach to his childs baseball team.

I like the list. Vance can play the bass?

Wonderful.

Well done Sophie Jie Jie.

I love this chapter.

I love the Chinese language one and the trip across the US. Wonderful.

Loved it