is there a sequel? if not can you write one? please? like she meets sasuke again? please?

wow that was...AMAZING :D

~nyan

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Janshin :O

Oh my goodness, am I the first reviewer? After reading this masterpiece I would've expected there to be many! You truly have a talent with writing. I am moved after reading this. You really brought forth the fact that Sasuke is not as evil as he is portrayed to be. I think Kishimoto had been trying to emphasize Sasuke's soft spot for Sakura since the beginning. Right now as the series goes I'd rather have no couplings what-so-ever, but if are to be couples I'd say SasuSaku and NaruHina for sure! Again I was truly touched by your work and you did a great job sucking me into the story! Thanks for the read!

Umm...this is quite odd considering they're like 13 xD but otherwise I liked it and it was well written w

This story was nothing short from amazing. I thought you did a wonderful job keeping the two in charecter and it was just a joy to read. :) I was actually quite fond of the big wording. But that's just me, it made it seem more real and mature to me. Thanks for writing such a wonderful piece! :D

I'm sorry that you felt that way. I appreciate critisism,as I am always trying to improve. It's probably true that the first paragraph or so was a little rich,but I do find myself using these words everyday,so I didn't think anything of it. I will try to tone it down a bit from now on. Thank you for your review~

If you want the absolute truth for a review, and actually want criticism, please read on. If not, then, you'd probably wouldn't enjoy reading this review. When it comes to stories, it's best to catch the reader's attention. You didn't. You try to morph sophisticated,(big words) together to form a well written story. But there is borderline between a writer that uses pretty words ...and complete utter boredom. To be honest, I wasn't able to finish the fanfic because it didn't catch my attention... at all. If you're pissed off, that's pretty much reasonable. But a review is meant to state the reader's opinion on the story. So I've stated mine. Please don't consider this as "a hate review" since that is not my intention. Just hoping that you'd consider this piece of advice. Whether you take it or not, I appreciate you reading.