Yay, Riff and Magenta are back together! Also, I LOVED the Harry Potter references!

And that "in my ass" game was funny :D

Keep writing!

Yayayayayayay! RIFFGENTA! I'm not in a very review-y mood, but I really liked the HP references _

She's so cute. how old is she? My brother's eight and I can literally get him to say to me, with those 3d glasses on "Dammit, Janet, i'm breaking up with you"

Fun Times.

I cannot tell you how much I just laughed right now. XDDDD

This was... so funny... the 'in my ass' game literally had me flopping around on my laptop like a seal. XDD

Is your sister the really cute kid from the video "Time Warp Mini Magenta" on the YouTube channel that has the same username as you? If so, she's absolutely adorable.

Forgive me if that sounded creepy.

YES! I love it when character break the forth wall!

Loved it. :3 Random Sweeney and Lovett. X3 Nice.

I'm curious, is Rocky supposed to be retarded in the story.

THERE IS HOPE FOR RIFFGENTA HOOPLAH! AND THIS IS JUST SO IN CHARACTER I LOVE IT. Sorry about the grounding. ): ANYWHO this was awesome! Way to go Eddie. AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Rocky.

Oh hello, what a weird little story you have tucked away here :)

So far so good. Tear-jerking, heart-warming, and unexpectedly hilarious at times - why didn't I read this earlier?

Oh, so much drama. The only complaint I have is Riff saying that he was going to kill himself because Mags wouldn't come home, it was a touch melodramatic. Apart from that, it was A-OK.

And I love the little splashes of light-heartedness from Frank - especially when he congratulated Riff on having a shitty life.

Anyway, great story, keep it coming :)

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THERE'S MORE THAN THIS? BUT THIS IS AWFUL! RIFFGENTA MY LOVE *dies a little* HAPPY ENDING COME ONNNNNN. Ugh, drama. Magenta you keep getting yourself into trouble. AND FUCK THIS SHE SHOULD HIT HOM BACK AND THEY SHOULD YELL AT WACH OTHER PROPERLY NOT BE ON CHAT PRETENDING TO BE ALL CIVIL AND ALL WAAAAAH YOU HIT ME Dx anywho, I guess this was a good chapter. I'm not at all pleased, but it kept me on edge so. RIFFGENTA KEEPS BREAKING UP IN ALL THE CHAT STORIES SADFACE. I need to fluff and not drama… aww fluff, so sweet AND NOT MANICALLY DEPRESSING SUICIDAL STUNTS THAT END IN MISCARRIAGE AND BROKEN RELATIONSHIPS BETWEEN TWO PERFECT ALIENS THAT DESERVE EACH OTHER. I understand this is under comedy NOT FUNNEH. Erm, I'm done writing, but my little frowny pout face is tightening so bad so that means I'm on the verge of tears. Sadness.

Awwww RiffGenta fight ): but they is my baby. They stay together? My baby cannot be split into two. It isn't conjoined (lawls even tho they is siblings) so yes. This is hilarious. Moar plz!

I love this so much xD

Oh, and I loved the Beavis and Butt-head reference xD

Great story(:

YAYAY FOR RIFFGENTA! (so rare nowadays.) Anywho, this was very hilarious. Janet being violated by the spider. Do I even want to know why you let your sister tie your ankles? Anywho. This is fun. And very interesting. And yeah.

I loved Frank's songs! :D And this was so funny! X3 And I feel sorry for your friend. That must've sucked. :3