Definitely will read the rewrite

Whats the point of doing an "Overhaul" of the story and "REEDITING" it if the end resunt of each chapter is worse than the original (theres lots of errors, you know)?
~ plus I kinda liked the original where harry turned into a Quezoquotal (mayan winged serpent).

Harry already got rid of the mice, so why were the three idiots doing it?
How could Finny, Mey-rin, and Bardroy be on the roof fixing a cable if Harry passed them in the hallway?
Again, How can Sebastian have caught the little mice in the Mannor that the three idiots couldn't catch if Harry had ALREADY caught them at the start of the chapter and thrown them out the widow to the cats?

Why is Sebastian talking as if Coffee is a sweet?
Everyone knows its very bitter unless you add the sweet stuff in later.

...I kinda liked the original version better. Couldn't you have left that up and just posted this as a different story?
Plus theres more errors.
By the way, up until now he gets angry any thime he's called "Harry" but now you have him getting mad when he's called "Hadrian" which is what he had always said he prefered.

thank you for the update. severely enjoy it

Please the 16 .

Glad that they finally mated and that Lucifer did not get to Harry first

Will Harry come back or will Sebastian have to find him somehow

So did Sebastian have another reason to kiss Harry and will he try again. Also, will Harry make sure that Grell knows to stay away from Sebastian.

How did the other Demon find him and why could Sebastian not feel all that energy since they were fighting at the house?

So who will Sebastian be more mad was taken, Harry or Ciel?

Too bad Harry didn't just use his magic to make her forget that he was there anytime she came over

How did they find out what Harry was and who found out?

This is a good beginning, I wonder what he found out and how he became a demon