This was a fantastic story

Hi,I'm Cecilia,Several years ago I've seen your fiction in a Chinese website,but it was a Chinese translation version which you gave your permission to the girls who wanted to translate after i read it,I was fully impressed and really has always been one of my favorites,I would review it from time to time,and i like Clato so much!Thank you for your wonderful words,those are really girls who translated it did such a pretty good work but now I can totally understand the English version,I feel completely happy. Hopefully I can see more your wishes to you!

amazing

The massive conversations are beginning to become annoying. Ik it probably won't be changed but after someone says something you start a new line, not carry on in the same paragraph.

But I'm loving the story so far.

Only two books/texts have made me cry in my life: The Hunger Games and this
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I LOVE THIS STORY! You're talented and I wish this was in the movie! You're like Suzanne Collins - only instead of talking about the boy with the bread, you focus on the two tributes who were probably going to win if it wasn't for Thresh and Cato threatening to take down Peeta. I love the fact you show their human and caring sides but don't make them all into sex, or all rainbows and ponies. I love that you show their angry sides, especially when they know they are on the cameras because they are careers after all. : ) Seriously, despite being bloodthirsty, they're pretty awesome. Along with Katniss, Peeta, Rue, Foxface and Thresh.

I DO PREFER CLOVE AND CATO. Main reason - they have a massive lust for blood and are both misunderstood. They seem to have a good bond over survival and know each other well enough to know that they are the best competitors. I'm not into love at first sight.

However, based on the movie, I don't mind Glimmer and Cato together because when I look at it from Cato's perspective he probably though "yeah she's attractive" but also they were making fun of the death of the girl and probably talking about strategy. Probably both of them thought "Oh they are from the career districts, they seem attractive" I think it was flirting and bonding over the fact they (Marvel, Clove, Cato, Glimmer) want to win the games and possibly play it up for the sponsors. I think he was also collaborating with her to develop ideas of who to kill off next (such as Peeta, when Glimmer complained about Peeta being reliable in the movie) because he did leave her when the tracker jackers came down.

As for her sleeping up against him. Whether it was Clove or Glimmer I would've found it cute for both Glato and Clato. It's cute and nice to see Cato's soft/protective side for a tiny bit. Would've preferred to see Clove and Cato like that (in my honest opinion) but it was nice to see that side of him. :P Even though it was for 2 seconds. And then we have see his real human side when he's about to die.

And here I am spending time talking about my favourite career tributes (along with Finnick but obviously he isn't in this story hahaha) when I should be studying for my exams tomorrow hahahaha.

I am kind of disappointed you left that part somewhat like canon. She should not even have had her head bashed with a rock since Cato /should/ have been covering her. Meh.

Should just stick together and wipe the competition out.

Didn't Clove already establish that she should have told Cato about the pregnancy? Why is she keeping it from him now when she already realized that keeping it a secret caused more issues than it solved?

I hope she doesn't keep this from Cato...

They are so cute together... I hope for the best for them~

Couldn't Saylee have just volunteered before the tribute was revealed? That would have been easy enough and would have solved the issues... of course, then we wouldn't really have this story. xD

I am so glad there is a piece of fanfic the sounds realistic for once

You said that Cato had written several pages front and back to Clove, that didn't look nearly long enough to be the actual letter he wrote her.

She shouldn't have had to clarify that she wasn't lying. It is sad that it was necessary. Also, Clove really named her kid, that was a girl, Troy? Poor kid. xD It's like naming a son Ashley are Brittney. xD